Class project 1 and the main project

Class project 1
This is how the shot on the boy should look like.
The full explanation behind this mistake is in lesson 6.
Here is the top view
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Main Class Project
The link to the scene that I analyzed is
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b2f2Kqt_KcE
The full breakdown of the scene, you can watch in lesson 7