Alan Wake's American Nightmare - Fan Trailer

Intro: I took this course to improve my video editing skills, more specifically, trailer editing. I have been editing for a while, on and off but decided to really dive deep into this area.
Project: I'm a huge fan of Remedy's games and decided to make a Fan Trailer for Alan Wake's American Nightmare, a sequel/spin-off of Alan Wake, a psychological thriller. For context, the original Alan Wake is a psychological thriller, while American Nightmare is, in the words of Sam Lake, "A pulp-action adventure, akin to Tarantino and From Dusk Until Dawn". So I tried to incorporate that action in the trailer while presenting some story.
I edited the trailer as I was watching the class and can say that I improved based on my first projects.
I hope you find this video good and I am open to all sorts of feedback.
Obs: The gameplay and cutscenes were captured using Nvidia Shadowplay, I added some SFXs and messed around with music and Premiere filters to try to make everything fit together(?).
Original Version
Final Version after feedback.