Advice Please! 🙏

I've loved your loose florals course and particularly your tonal studies, I have now gone tonal study mad! They are so good to get your eye in etc I've been tackling more complicated compositions and I am really wondering what I should do about the very dark areas that are in the middle of arrangements, as you can see on this one I have left it, but what would you do? Ohn Mar, I'd love your input if you have a moment or anyone for that matter! Thank you!
PS I have now finished the colour version above. Still not sure whether I should add darker tones at the centre of the posy or whether I should leave as is so that it is light and airy? I'd love to hear your thoughts!
