Jon Brommet

Dessin de personnages des années 1930 : Illustrez des personnages emblématiques

This is super dope! Clearly you know a thing or two about making characters. My only input is although Tooth is funny since he's got 1 tooth, I think it's distracting. Since the shape looks like a tube of toothpaste and he's holding a tooth brush, I think you could keep the bar, but remove the text. Just a thought. I feel like the little lines at the bottom are the same. They are distracting. I'd space those out a lot (even though it's less realistic). I'm only giving my opinion because it's so awesome. But feel free to take or leave it!

Thank you for the tips, Jon!  I made some tweaks based on your notes, very helpful - It's always great to get feedback from someone who's seeing with 'fresh eyes' - thank you for taking the time to comment so quickly! This was a really fun project!

Hey Vee! Good news. For the contest I did the random number generator first, and you won! I haven't narrowed down my other two winners yet, so I haven't announced it. But I figured I'd let you know so we can get started refining yours to be pin ready!

Shoot me an e-mail to info@jonbrommet.com with your file, and I'll talk to Apple Metal and see what works and what doesn't. Might need to figure out a few things to make it work as a pin, but nothing major.

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