Niamh Prior

Améliorez votre poésie : évitez ces 5 erreurs pour débutants

<p>Great work, Ruth. This is such an effective redraft. The second one is so much more relatable and striking in its use of language and imagery. I especially like 'the traces of dry blood on my lips' and 'the sky is a cold white curtain'. (I have to admit, I actually quite like the odd ending of the last line in the first draft, too!)</p>

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