Train Ride

Memory Exercise
Reference Exercise
Imporive old art Exercise
This is a pencil drawing from about a year ago. There is alot of issues with this, but the main ones to my mind are:
- The propotions are incorrect
- The characters are too small
- The background is bare
- The contrast is inconsistent
- Some lines are to harsh
- The background is static (despite the train journey)
The good points I can think of is the hair has a sense direction and the jumper has a shoft feeling to it.
Re-Draw
I changed the positioning to the characters and corrected the propotions (mostly). I looked through different hugging couples/families and I think the characters are better placed compared to the presivous ones. I also better defined the expressions I think...
Sketch
Line Art
Final