Train Ride

Train Ride - student project

Memory Exercise

Reference Exercise

Imporive old art Exercise

This is a pencil drawing from about a year ago. There is alot of issues with this, but the main ones to my mind are:

  1. The propotions are incorrect
  2. The characters are too small
  3. The background is bare
  4. The contrast is inconsistent
  5. Some lines are to harsh
  6. The background is static (despite the train journey)

The good points I can think of is the hair has a sense direction and the jumper has a shoft feeling to it. 


I changed the positioning to the characters and corrected the propotions (mostly). I looked through different hugging couples/families and I think the characters are better placed compared to the presivous ones. I also better defined the expressions I think...



Line Art