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Contar historias con cómics 1: personajes y secuencia

Yes indeed. Think of the comic frame as your TV screen. The dog can go out of frame and back again, without the camera following the dog. (the camera is still, like on a tripod in this comic). The comic works overall. Good effort.  If I were to suggest things that can be improved even more, I'd do this: In panel 2, the hand has thrown the stick. So I'd draw the arm/hand pose in the last action of the throw. (observe your own arm and hand). Eg. does the palm tilt down? etc. Presently, it can feel a little bit like a mid-throw. The stick can also be further away and you can also use a symbol line to show its trajectory. (optional) Throughout the comic, the characters seem to be shown moving downward and out of the frame. Since we are showing a locked off camera shot and we want to see their full bodies in this sequence, it's good to keep the characters on the same level in the panels throughout. Overall, I also like like how you chose to pose your figures. They are well thought out. Nicely done!

Hard to fit everything in the square, but perhaps half a running dog suggests also speed
<img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/4d0c2577.jpg 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/4d0c2577.jpg 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/4d0c2577.jpg" loading="lazy" alt="Throw that stick, boss - image 1 - student project">

Throw that stick, boss

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