Storyboard Pt 2
The second course was interesting and useful, thank you very much.
Here's my attempt at storyboarding the proposed script.
It seems to me that the scene turned out to be too long, but at the same time I'm not sure if I would throw out some frames (but I think I can get rid of a couple of pieces if I think a little longer).
It also seems to me that there is an imbalance in the direction of close shots. I wanted to convey the reactions of the characters to events and some reflection, but I think I got too carried away with this ...
In any case, I will be grateful for criticism and edits. Thanks.








