Siobhan Twomey

Técnicas avanzadas de creación de storyboard

Hi Alex! Wow I just looked at your storyboard and I'm super impressed! great work here (and kudos on using Toonboom, that's great to see). Overall this is excellent, it's very professional looking and what i love most about it is that the flow of shots is seamless, at no point do we lose the camera direction or dynamic between characters - that's crucial to see because this scene is actually quite complex once you start cutting back and forth between characters: it's not a simple dialogue between 2 people, it's acutely between 4. So well done on that - also your shot choices really are well set-up for the action - for example when Abe gets shot, that is a good choice to move the camera angle to capture him falling. There are a couple of things I can suggest to work on or to think abut going forward: one is you could think about introducing an extreme close up at the point where Bob gets the diamonds, just to underscore the emotion and greed at that point. From shot 9 to 10 I feel like the drama needs to be heightened a bit , and possibly introducing that tighter close up at that point would work, just as you did when his hat got shot off. The other thing I would suggest is that going forward, you could think about experimenting with more dynamic camera angles like a tilted angle on an action shot, or an angle looking down on the scene. These kinds of angles are great for adding a more dynamic and fast-paced feeling. My last bit of feedback would be to encourage you to keep drawing! There is lots of potential here, and you clearly have a wonderful sense of visual storytelling, so keep your drawing practice going and try to draw as much a you can - you'll see lots of improvement quickly, i'm sure of it. Overall, great work! Thanks for posting this, and let me know if you have any questions going forward :)

Thank you so much for the feeback, Siobhan! I will take everything you said into consideration going forward. I really appreciate it.

My final storyboard project for the Advanced Storyboarding Techniques course. The project is in a PDF format, so I couldn't put it here, but you can access the storyboard by clicking on this link: <a href="https://drive.google.com/file/d/1QED8HMdXLSRYWno5NS8R5j3tnFfEQfkQ/view?usp=sharing" rel="nofollow noreferrer noopener" target="_blank">https://drive.google.com/file/d/1QED8HMdXLSRYWno5NS8R5j3tnFfEQfkQ/view?usp=sharing</a>
Feedback would very much be appreciated! I'd like to know what works and what can be improved.

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