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Secrets To Writing Believable Dialogue

Secrets To Writing Believable Dialogue - student project

Project: 'You didn't, did you? Not really?' 

'You didn't, did you? Not really? You are not that stupid... This must ba a mistake. Eskiel looked at Andrea through her jail cell, one place he would never expect to see her.

'Yes, I did attack him, and would kill him if guards were slower.'

'Kill him? Who, the fuck, was he?'

'Yukalo, that druid. The city fell! Everybody's dead because of him! And that cat was drinking here like nothing happend.' Andrea hissed.

'Wait, you found the enemy and decided to fight alone? Are you insane? Yau are supposed to be smart one!' Eskiel yelled, raising his hands in frustration. Finally, he was glad she was in jail and not dead.

'Well, I am the angry one.' She said, determined to finish what she started.

'Now, what am I supposed to say to the guards?'

'Just pay the bill and take it from my share. Nobody is dead, so it's fine.' The not dead part made her bite her lip as much as it made Eskiel sigh.