Ben Nielsen

Intro a Affinity Publisher en iPad: diseño de una tabla de estados

Hi John, great, thanks for uploading that! This is a good first mood board. A couple of notes of feedback, first I would recommend lessening your stroke width around your frames, because of the intensity of the colors you are using the frames almost become the focus rather than just helping to offset the images and text. Also that will help your text to not crowd in to your frames like it is making it easier to read. Speaking of your colors I notice that the blue and green are not getting used at all leading to your color palette feeling more monochromatic and analogous which is a bit overwhelming on the eyes, I would try substituting in the green and blue and see if that helps. 
Also feel free to leave a review of the class if you have not already done so, that can be found under the review tab of the course. Thanks!

Hi John, thanks for sharing your project. If you wouldn't mind could you upload the image to the body section of the project? That will make it so I can see the whole thing. You can also upload multiple images there so if you want to show a few of your arrangements you can do that. As far as symmetry goes that is a valid creative way to do a layout, but it is always good to experiment with new things too.

<img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/9b696f86ca511706c49121d50d7b1e7f/5cba576d.jpg 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/9b696f86ca511706c49121d50d7b1e7f/5cba576d.jpg 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/9b696f86ca511706c49121d50d7b1e7f/5cba576d.jpg" loading="lazy" alt="Sacramento - image 1 - student project">My mood board. I tried a couple of arrangements but the technician in me likes symetrical. I think I'm going to have try to break that habit and get more creative. Great class, thank you. I am now going to follow up with your designer class. I see the parallels between the program now. JV

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