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Rough draft of part of the first act.

Rough draft of part of the first act. - student project

 

Title: From Concrete to Estates
Genre: Drama

FADE IN:

EXT. URBAN NEIGHBORHOOD - DAY

The sun struggles to break through the gray clouds, casting a dim light on the gritty streets. MARQUALA (40s, African American), walks with determination, her eyes heavy with unspoken dreams. Hip-hop music blares from a nearby car. Her steps are measured, a silent promise etched on her face.

MARQUALA:
(voiceover, determined)
I won't let my kids become victims of this place.

A car roars past, almost hitting Marquala, racing away from police sirens. She jumps back, heart racing. Tears well in her eyes.

MARQUALA:
(voiceover, emotional)
We need out of this hellhole.

INT. FAST-FOOD RESTAURANT - NIGHT

Marquala stands behind the counter, struggling to smile as she interacts with CUSTOMERS. Her manager, MS. THOMPSON, observes from a distance.

MS. THOMPSON:
(encouraging)
Keep up the good work, Marquala.

MARQUALA:
(faint smile)
Thanks, Ms. Thompson.

Marquala's break begins. She takes a moment to wipe away tears before clocking out. She leaves the restaurant, sighing as she gazes at the stars.

EXT. MEETING SPOT - NIGHT

Marquala stands under a flickering streetlight, waiting. Gentry a friend she met in college. They took a business course together (30s, African American, charismatic), arrives.

GENTRY:
(cheerful)
Long day, Marquala?

MARQUALA:
(exhausted)
You have no idea.

They begin to walk.

GENTRY:
(supportive)
You're doing better than you think, Marquala. I can see it.

MARQUALA:
(struggling smile)
Trying to rise above these streets, Gentry.

They walk, the city noise a constant background.

GENTRY:
(earnest)
You ever thought about real estate? Turning your determination into investments?

MARQUALA:
(raises an eyebrow)
Real estate?

GENTRY:
(enthusiastic)
It's a way out, Marquala. From the projects to estates.

MARQUALA:
(intrigued)
Tell me more.

Gentry

I can help you.