Protagonist: Tilus Chu

Backstory:

Before Personality: Aloof, Independent, doesn't trust anyone but himself. However, he keeps relationships with people to manipulate them to get what he wants or something he can gain. This person is self-centered, judgmental, and a perfectionist who supports his beliefs. He always felt that he did not have enough yet.

He grows up without many friends and sticks with people he knows. He grew up in a middle-class family that forced him to study a lot, so he lacked much communication experience. However, his friends helped him overcome his aloof situation, and he grew attached to them.

He used to find the World was unfair and that suicide was the way out of his unfairness. He often compares himself to his peers, and over time, it leads to depression. However, he overcomes that before the story begins.

After Personality: Learn to trust, rely on others, and become interdependent. Genuinely care for others and help them.

1. P R O T A G O N I S T D R I V E

A person who wants to overcome adversity no longer lives with regrets and protects what he needs to watch, even at the cost of his life.

He wanted to strengthen and build his forces to protect what he cared for in the story.)

He needs to rely on others to build a deeper relationship with his loved ones and find his happiness (Need)

Agency: He pursued to become strong and build his team through his lies, abilities, or whatever he had to drive the other person to do what he wanted; however, he had a sense of morals to hold him back.

1. P R O T A G O N I S T STRENGTH AND ABILITIES. MOVEMENT (POP)

See through other trauma and allow himself to choose one ability from his enemy to replicate to his own.

He was thrown into a world that turned into an apocalypse. He was the only one who got a journal record of future events sent by a constellation (aka Gods or higher beings)

His goal was to survive and form an ending he had in mind after knowing the future events.

He creates a guild, produces medicine and recruits allies to increase his chances of beating the Constellation and other foes.

 However, there are a few that he, after reading the journal, genuinely cares about and wishes to save them.

1. P R O T A G O N I S T F L AW

Limit: he had a limited amount of mana, which is something that is used to measure a person's strength and status in the story

He can be overly attached to someone he cares about.

Misbelief: Blame himself over things he can't control: his friend's death, his failure to reach his goal. 

Push himself over his limit rather than rely on those surrounding him.

He always faked a smile to hide his pain so no one could hurt him.

1. PROTAGONIST VIBE

The main protagonist gives out a calming vibe, but he can be very intimidating if he wants to. 

Calm and collected, rely on strategy to win rather than brute force. However, if one were to intimidate him, he wouldn't hesitate to teach that person a lesson.

 

Like: happy ending, money, justice

Hate: Noisy people, people who want to leech on others, tragedy,

Protagonist depth: He learns to rely on others more and trust them rather than try to use them or make them follow his orders. He had

 

Female lead and 2nd Antagonist: Alicia Astor

1. POP: unique trait and ability Smart, critical thinking, open-minded, bold, somewhat crazy, obsessive, likes making fun of the Mc, elegant, strive forward, strong-willed, not easy to fall for doubt, reasonable, acts reckless, likes to dress up in multiple outfits, like cats

She killed her loved ones, parents, and friends who became monsters, earning the nickname White Death due to fear. Her hair turned white from using her power. She manages the ability to control time. She can use her power by drawing time, health, and lifespan from humans, monsters, and machinery. She dresses in a blue military uniform that is modified into a dress.

She killed over 10,000 people one night, earning her the title of White Death. She doesn't hesitate to kill or attack anyone that stands in her way. However, she only killed people whom she deems to be villains who are harming people or animals

2. FLAWS OR INTERNAL CONFLICT

• She believes no one can save her and must be alone to achieve her goal. She wants to fulfill her dream or her sense of justice, even if it is at the cost of her life and her comrades.
• Believe no one can love her or can love anyone.
• She believes it is all her fault that those dear to her die, and she can't prevent it.
• He believes her relationship with her sister will never improve after she killed her parents; now, they stand on the opposite side.

Through clashing with the Protagonist multiple times, she soon accepts that she doesn't want to fight the battle alone and that her way of doing things has been wrong. As she tries to manipulate the protagonist to reach her goals, the protagonist asks her for help and helps her several times.

3. DRIVE

She wants to save the World, even if it costs her life; she wants to save souls that can't be saved, including her family and friends. She wants to kill the Constellations, which she believes to be the leading cause of destruction, so she is known as Constellation Hunter in the future, which was written in the journal. And she was known as the strongest human in the journal.

She believes that she can take all the time of the main characters and those who are substantial. She can return more to the distant past to prevent the disaster that happened.

1. Vibe

Crazy, menacing, badass, hard to guess what was on her mind. Elegant, can be reckless at times. She gives a dangerous vibe right at the moment people see her. 

 

The main Antagonists force want to destroy everything because they believe everything comes from nothingness and should go back to it. They are monsters called Legion that come in many shapes and wishes: destruction and chaos. Higher beings from space created them.

 

Hi, this is my project. However, I still feel it is lacking somewhere, so can you help check it for me?

I feel like I can't connect the Mc backstory or growth into the story, and I've been stuck for 2 months. I'm writing lit RPG and apocalypse-type action, romance, and tragedy.

I stumbled upon your lecture while trying to craft my male main character with other characters and their backstory. I only put the ml and fml here to see if I am on the right path or if there are other things I still need to work on. I would greatly appreciate it if you could read it and give me feedback. Thank you