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Mystery

Mystery - image 1 - student project

I thought the house a in the center of the frame was interesting and contrasted well with the green foliage all around. Then, the second vertical line (rule of thirds) intersects with the girl leading us to the house. I liked the wide shot for this to display the desolation of the house, posing some questions for viewers to wonder about the setting, the house, and the girl's objective. 

I do wish that the background was more in focus, so I would invest in a wider angled lense, as well as adjust the aperture along with that to emphasize the colors of the space. I believe the aperture I chose did not do the colors of the environment justice. However, I also like the moodiness of the muddier color.

Would love some feedback, tips to improve!