Kyle Petchock

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Cool pose. And Amazed at you line art.

My apologies for the late reply, for some reason I didn't see your Miles Morales when you posted it, but it just showed up now in my notifications. Not bad! A few things to continue to work on are some of the proportions. For his right lower leg, it should be pointing backwards a bit since it's bent, and his left lower leg should either be pointing in the same direction as his right side, or extended far to the left more, like he's in a low lunging pose. Right now the left lower leg looks like it's five inches tall, so you definitely want to correct that. Also work on the head structures as well, specifically the right side of his cheek bone. It looks too flat and lacks the proper structural definition. Be sure to also check out lesson 1 in my male figure drawing course where I break down drawing the head. Other than those things everything else looks solid. Great job and keep it up!

Nice job! The dynamics of the poses look ok, but they could be better (especially Batman). Some other things to improve upon are the proportions and anatomy of the characters as well as their facial expressions. Superman's head is a bit too small for his muscular torso, and with his pose it would make more sense for his head to be facing more forward. His back right leg also looks too short, and the foreshortening is off a bit (remember, objects that are further away will be smaller. His front extended hand looks great though!). Batman should also be a bit larger overall since he's in the foreground. His torso also looks too small and the foreshortening of the legs are off. His right lower leg is too short, and the left foot should also be vertical so it doesn't look like it's bending the wrong way. Another thing is to add more depth to the coloring so the characters don't look so flat, and also try to push yourself to draw the background from scratch rather than using a photo. Great job and keep it up! :D

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