David Jaasma

Blender: renderización de productos para principiantes

Great work! and thanks for participating in this course.First of all, I am super happy that you learned a lot. The amount of renders shows that you have put in a lot of time to better yourself and this is why I would like to give you some feedback. I hope this feedback will help you in your future renders.Feedback: 1. Coconut bottle pink background. The lighting looks appealing but the highlights on the bottle far away might be a bit too bright. (there is a highlight which makes our eyes gravitate to the bottle in the back) This is something we want to avoid because our focus should be on the main object in the scene.2. Coconut bottle palm leaves. Again great composition and the lighting actually works. I do suggest playing around with the depth of field because the middle palm leaf is sharp but the middle bottle seems to be blurry.3. Perfume bottle (liquid ass). The composition looks great. however, I do think we are missing a bit of brightness because the product looks dark and dull. Changing the position or power of the key light would fix that issue.4. glass of water. Great lighting and great composition. The only thing that stands out is that the water has some issues. It looks like the IOR of the water is too high or the water object intersects with the glass object.I hope you have learned something from this feedback. And I want you to be proud of yourself for these renders!

Great course! Learned a lot!
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