Alan Sharpe

Redacción en línea: cómo crear una página de destino que funciones como un imán de clientes potenciales

I think the second one is better, but you must improve your grammar. "How I make" should be "How I made."The CTA should be something about downloading the PDF, not getting access.The screenshot of financial results has the same figures twice, and is not self-explanatory.

<img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/d197ea662b057a91bd67be8d1501bbc6/fe3cab80.jpg 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/d197ea662b057a91bd67be8d1501bbc6/fe3cab80.jpg 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/d197ea662b057a91bd67be8d1501bbc6/fe3cab80.jpg" loading="lazy" alt="Lead capture Page - image 1 - student project">Hey, is it all right ? I eagerly look forward to hearing from you.
 
 
<img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/d197ea662b057a91bd67be8d1501bbc6/78486165.jpeg 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/d197ea662b057a91bd67be8d1501bbc6/78486165.jpeg 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/d197ea662b057a91bd67be8d1501bbc6/78486165.jpeg" loading="lazy" alt="Lead capture Page - image 2 - student project">
This is the 2nd version of lead page.
Which is better?

Lead capture Page

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