Exploring a Welsh Moutian route | Solo Travel

Hi everyone, Today im taking you on a Magical Journey to sectret hidden gem nestled in the middle of a Welsh valley. Together well see some beauty.
Any tips on how to improve will be very very very much apreciated! :)) and thank for taking the time to have a look over it for me :)
(In hindsight - I should have dont more planning when doing this, more scripting to I had more interesting things to say and do when on the trek. I should also raise the camera up a bit so im not talking down to the viewer. I also thing i need to work on my audio editing skills.. so please excuse the sounds of my dying climbing up this mountian hahah).