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Dibujar lo que quieras: técnicas básicas para crear proporciones realistas

Hi San! I am so impressed with your beautiful work! You chose a super challenging subject, and definitely nailed the overall "Basic Form proportions, and even added some lovely shading -- well done! I have 5 specific suggestions for things that could be tweaked to improve the proportions and sense of realism. I've attached an image of my notes (the numbers on the image correspond to the numbers below): <ol><li>This is a simple fix -- this line/bar looks to me like it should be a bit longer</li> <li>Thus shape here may need to be a little longer as well. I think the overall length of this part of the tool is right, but the curvy part may need to extend a bit.</li> <li>The more complex bits at the top of the tool (this whole section I have squared off) may need to be a little bit smaller in proportion to the rest of the tool. That alone will help this read as more proportional</li> <li>The angle of this part of the tool looks like it might need to be brought up to follow the straighter angle of its neighboring part.</li> <li>The angle/perspective of this part of the tool needs to be a bit sharper upwards.<img src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/parentClasses/c4ccd980d7cb7a26a2b7d360097c7c43/1c972d70" class="zoomable rounded-image-wrapper" alt="1c972d70" /></li> </ol>Thank you again for sharing your work with us! You really should be proud -- these are all minor tweaks, just to help take your piece to that next level! Kendyll

Thank you so so much for the feedback:) It’s really very helpful.  Now I can clearly see where I need to work on.

<img style="margin-left:auto;margin-right:auto;" src="https://static.skillshare.com/cdn-cgi/image/quality=80,width=1000,format=auto/uploads/project/365b531207e1881291bf53f1655492d0/f4f29193" alt="Drawing realistic proportions - image 1 - student project" srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/cdn-cgi/image/quality=80,width=600,format=auto/uploads/project/365b531207e1881291bf53f1655492d0/f4f29193 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/cdn-cgi/image/quality=80,width=1000,format=auto/uploads/project/365b531207e1881291bf53f1655492d0/f4f29193 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" loading="lazy">
<img style="margin-left:auto;margin-right:auto;" src="https://static.skillshare.com/cdn-cgi/image/quality=80,width=1000,format=auto/uploads/project/365b531207e1881291bf53f1655492d0/5e1143ad" alt="Drawing realistic proportions - image 2 - student project" srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/cdn-cgi/image/quality=80,width=600,format=auto/uploads/project/365b531207e1881291bf53f1655492d0/5e1143ad 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/cdn-cgi/image/quality=80,width=1000,format=auto/uploads/project/365b531207e1881291bf53f1655492d0/5e1143ad 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" loading="lazy">
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I found it quite challenging to draw this. &nbsp;Would love to hear your feedback. &nbsp;Thank you so much for an awesome class.

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