Diane Flick

Pastel de aceite realista para principiantes curiosos

Wow Ayse!  Thank you for sharing your beautiful work! And thank you for your kind words. I'm a working mom so don't get a chance to create classes often, but I'll take your recommendation into consideration. it will be awhile b/c I'm currently working on a new oil painting class. But perhaps I'll do another oil pastel after that one :) In the meantime, I have just a couple minor suggestions if you wanted to do more on your apple. You could scrape and brighten the brightest highlight, if the paper will accept more white there. You could also darken your occlusion shadow. There is a very skinny dark blue outline on the left side of the apple that I would make into the same light blue as the background. You could also very slightly brighen the reflected light on the lower right side and blend the folds in the background just slightly.  Really, if you did nothing, it would still be a fantastic finished piece! These are just minor tweak suggestions b/c I like to try to offer students who post finished work something more if I can. I hope you keep on drawing (a lot) and take good care :)

It was a fantastic lesson!  Please upload more oil pastel tutorials. I'd love to see more!
<img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/f113aed9.jpg 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/f113aed9.jpg 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/f113aed9.jpg" loading="lazy" alt="Apple - image 1 - student project">

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