Title: Sampson’s Thanksgiving Adventure

 

(Does it stand out? Is it alliterative? Does it pose a question or problem? Does it combine unlike things?)

 

Opening Scene:

Sampson was a big Rottweiler with shiny black fur and warm brown eyes.

 

(Make sure you introduce the main character and the story problem)

 

Pitch:

 

When a big-hearted Rottweiler follows his nose through the countryside, Sampson’s morning adventure leads to an unexpected Thanksgiving surprise—one he proudly brings home in his mouth.

 

(Main Character wants to do something but can’t because of obstacles. This story takes place in a place where the main character learns something.)