Robert Marzullo

Digital Inking for Comics - A Futuristic Scene

Hello Stephen,It looks good. I would try to add more line variation. Use bolder lines for edges of the forms and thinner lines for the interior details. This applies to the characters and even the computer screens. It helps to break up the scene and allow the viewer to take in all the information more easily.You can also use thinker or bolder lines as the forms get closer to the viewer to add depth.Good luck with your art and keep up the hard work!-Robert

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