Melinda Wilde

Rain Drops on the Window Pane

<p>Hi Elisabetta, Good job on this exercise!  I really like your colours because there are so many colour changes within each item.  It looks like you used ultra marine in your sky which is why you got that granular texture which is just fine but it does compete a little with your rain drops.  I really like the movement you achieved also. Rain drops do come in many shapes but I think if you can get them a little more regularly oval (if that makes any sense) and keep the colours inside them within them entirely, then they will speak even more of what they are.  I hope this makes some sense Elisabetta and please feel free to reach out if you need more clarification.  Overall; great job and thanks for taking my class!  best, melinda</p>

Thank you for your feedback! It does make a lot of sense.

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