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Telling Stories With Comics 3: A Mundane Conversation Scene

Oh dear! So much drama. Good drama! I'm guessing this was done digitally, simulating pencils. And I think it is done very well. Like, you kept the panel lines similar to the drawings inside. And it does look like how one would draw with pencils. Even how the colours would go underneath the blacks. I like the simplicity of your character designs. The head shapes provide enough distinction between them. If I were to offer any tips for improvement, it would be do a final check for typos or punctuations. When I do comics, they will always appear. So I usually put it aside, and on the next day, look at it again with fresh eyes and spot those small typos and such. Eg. "Tonight's",  " I said, why not!", "What's wrong?" and some fullstops at the end of some sentences. Haha this sounds like english class doesn't it?  The arrangement of the bubbles are spot on. Minimal colours and contrast work well to make readers focus on the characters. Nice! I hope you keep telling stories with comics!

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Simple and mundane 😊

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