Siobhan Twomey

Procreate Dreams: How to Animate a Short Film

<p>Wowww!! This is so good Anna!! I hope you learnt something in this class, because that project looks like it was done by a pro, no jokes. Fantastic animation there. Your skate cycle on the polar bear is flawless, really love how the skates match the sound perfectly and the rhythm and timing is spot on. The same with the penguin, and in fact your animation of the penguin is so good - the slight forward and back motion gives the skate a really natural feel, and it totally solves the tricky problem of "twinning" where normally the legs might look like they don't switch sides. Again, the timing is perfect. Overall this is excellent character animation. If you wanted to change up anything, the ONLY thing I would say is to maybe look at making more movement on the scarf?? There's an opportunity there that you could add a touch more flow or movement on it. It's totally up to you, if you wanted to add a final flair on this otherwise prefect project!! Wow, well done, so excited to see this  </p>

Thank you very much for such a detailed review! In my opinion, rocks/stones in the front also don't look very good

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