Doctor Shaene 

How to Write a Personal Statement - The Complete Medicine Masterclass

Is Skill share only helping people who want to write personal statements for medicine?... because I thought you will be helping other people that do Business.

Overall great! Few things to work on. Give more specific examples e.g. 2nd para about communication - given an example where u developed that skill! The COPD example is great though! Maybe tone down some of the "fancy words" like continuum of learning medicine. If you're aiming Cam then I'd put in more about supra-curricular academia and less on extra-curricular, just like we've seen in the course. Best of luck! And I'd love it if you left a review for the class!

for the communication bit, my intention was to lead on from my work experience reflection and start doing the volunteering which developed my communication skills.
thanks for the feedback though! ill go and find some more supra-curricular and maybe try and compound the extra-curricular more.
Ill write a review now

Yep I do see that, that's a nice flow! Thanks!

I have just completed my first copy which I am proud of, and is within the character limit {by two characters :) }
I would appreciate any feedback
Note, I want to apply to Cambridge, Downing college<img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/579687443d73984a42956daa5fd5d0b9/c114b6aa 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/579687443d73984a42956daa5fd5d0b9/c114b6aa 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/579687443d73984a42956daa5fd5d0b9/c114b6aa" loading="lazy" alt="Personal Statement - image 1 - student project">

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