My defenses (feedback request)

My defenses (feedback request) - student project

Hey, my name is Ovidiu and I am from Romania. Back in 2020, in the pandemic, i tried to write a song in English, and it is way different from what I am writing usually. I would love to hear some feedback. I tried a little bit of production, to have a little demo, and my voice is not great in this recording. But I am very curious about what I can improve in this song. 

This course helped me realise the importance of analysing my songs, my lyrics, my melodies, and to try again and again.