Joshua Dickinson

Write Your Screenplay: The Craft of Story, Structure and Script

One of the coolest trainer I have seen which did help me get closer to my project on which I am working on...Was lacking these skills which you have taught, and genuinely thanking you for every seconds you have put in to teach us and share your knowledge. Lots of good wishes and happiness to u :) Rohini from India (An AvGeek)

Hi Sarvesh! Thanks for watching the class and posting your logline. I think it's nearly there and could be improved by being clearer about the goal.The protagonist and obstacle are really clear, but you have three different action words for your goal that could be three very different films: ‘protect his family and friends’, ‘defeat the evil creature’ and ‘save the world’. Although all these things might happen, pick the most important one to be the goal that drives your protagonist. It might help to think of your genre, is it sci-fi or horror?Which goal would you focus on?

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