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1. Introduction: If you run a creative business
and want your content to work harder while
feeling easier to create, this class will
give you the skills to do it with confidence. I'm Ruth, a professional
copywriter with industry experience across in house agency and
freelance roles. My work is grounded in
recognized marketing principles, and the techniques I teach
here are the same ones I use every day with my
creative business clients. Creative entrepreneurs
often tell me that writing content is
the slowest and most frustrating part of
running their business. They know their work is good. They just need clear
guidance, practical steps, and examples they can follow, so their marketing feels more
natural and less demanding. That's what this class delivers. You'll learn how to write engaging persuasive content
for your creative brand. You'll shape your story, write stronger
product descriptions, create SEO friendly web content, and craft social posts that help people
connect with your work. The goal is simple, give you more time and energy for
the creative work you love. This is a beginner
friendly class. You only need a good
grasp of English and basic marketing awareness. What you'll learn
here will support the growth of your
creative business and make your everyday marketing feel much easier. Let's get started.
2. Class and Project Overview: Before we get
going, I'm going to quickly talk you through
how the lessons in this class are
organized and also introduce you to
the class project. We'll kick off with some advice on telling your brand story, how to get across who
you are and what you do in a way that's
engaging and concise. In the next lesson,
I'll share with you the secret of selling
without the sleevee. I promise you this works. So if you ever feel like a cheesy salesperson when you try to write marketing copy, you can wave goodbye to
that feeling right now. Following on from that, we'll
focus on the specifics of writing product
descriptions that are accurate and authentic. Then I'll share with
you a tried and tested versatile copywriting
template that you can use for everything from
product descriptions and landing pages to
social media posts. And we'll follow that up with three powerful hacks for keeping your copy
clear and concise, something that's so important in this age of limited
attention spans. Next, we'll cover writing for social before I'll wrap
things up by sharing some common mistakes I see people make when
writing copy for their creative
businesses and how you can avoid them. And
that's not all. There are two quickies
in the mix, too, short and sweet lessons focusing on two very different
copywriting skills, engaging the senses and
search engine optimization. Throughout, we'll explore
real world examples of brands using each of the
techniques we'll learn, and you'll get to know my
fictional client, Amy. Amy is a professional
illustrator and calligrapher. I'll show you exactly how to put your new skills into
action with step by step tutorials featuring copy I've written
for her business. That's where your class
project comes in. I'd like you to pick
a few pieces of existing copy to use
as a starting point, maybe some text
from your website, a product description, and a social media
post, for example. They should be representative
of the kind of content you write regularly
and would like to improve. In the course of this class, use the various tips, techniques and tools we'll
explore to improve your copy. You can work on it
as you go along. You'll be amazed how much it
improves with each lesson. To help you with your project, there's a PDF cheat sheet you can download from the
class description. It lists all the techniques
we'll cover in the class, so you can follow along
during the lessons and use it as a checklist
for future writing. Also in the class
description are links to the different free
online tools and resources I'll introduce you
to throughout the class. Well, if you've picked out a
few pieces of copy to work on and you've got
the cheat sheet to hand, we're ready to go. In our first lesson, we'll look at telling your brand story, how to find your unique
voice and get across who you are and what you do in a way
that's engaging and concise.
3. Telling Your Brand Story: This lesson will be particularly useful for when you're
writing your profiles for social media or for online shops or be a about
page of your website. That's exactly what I'm helping my fictional
clients, Amy, to do. I'll be explaining a lot of these copywriting
techniques using Amy's business copy
as an example, as well as sharing examples of best practice from real life
creative entrepreneurs. As a creative, you
want your copy to reflect your creativity
and unique personality, but that's easier
said than done. How often do you read back
something you've written and think it sounds
stilted and formal? Well, the reason for
that might be that you're over using
the third person. Take a look at these sentences
from Amy's About page. The sentences on the left are written in the third person. They talk about
Amy from the point of view of an outside observer. Not only does
writing in this way, make your copy feel
awkward and formal, but it stops you creating a direct relationship
to your reader, and that's so important
when it comes to building trust and empathy
and making sales. Compare them with the
sentences on the right. They're written in
the first person. They speak directly
from Amy to her reader. They're warmer and feel
more direct and personal. Look at this lovely bio of Alice Negri on the Beehive
Illustration website. It feels very personal
and heartfelt. Imagine the difference if each I was replaced with Alice or she. It would have nowhere
near the same impact. In fact, if you take
time to explore the illustrator's
bios on this website, you'll see that some of
them use the third person, and some of them use
the first person. And it's the first person bios that are the
most effective, direct and appealing every time. So as a general rule, use I when you're
writing about yourself, just like you do when you're
talking about yourself. Here's Amy's mission
statement or bio. I'm going to adjust it so that
it's in the first person. Let's build on that
first person principle to describe who you are and what you do in a way that expresses your unique voice
and personality. It's the words you use as much as the message
itself that defines your own unique tone of
voice and makes your writing either blend into the background or stand out from the crowd. So let's look at how word
choice can alter the tone of Amy's simple one
sentence mission statement. Right now, Amy's
mission statement is straightforward and accurate, but it's also just a little bit dull and not very memorable. It doesn't set her
apart from the crowd. Well, this one's a
bit more dramatic. There's a real energy
behind this version, and that's because
of the words we've used, epic explosive, Stella. They give a real sense of drama. This version is a
lot more memorable. This version is also upbeat, but it has a gentler,
more feminine feel to it. That's mainly because of the
words sparkle and pretty. Isn't it amazing the
huge difference that just a few simple word
changes can make? There's a simplicity
and directness to this mission statement that matches the rebellious
description. The visual picture
of stamping out a work of art is also
really memorable. And there's something
refreshing about someone in a profession
that's often seen as wishy washy and girly presenting themselves in this
slightly aggressive way. This is a very
gentle version that uses words drawn from
nature and therapy. It's the words
nature, nurturing, sooth, and soul that
jump out at you here. So now you've seen
how word choice can dramatically alter a
simple mission statement. It's time for you to have a go. Ima, who creates four, and now I'm on a mission two Start with this
simple template and fill in the blanks. Begin with a very simple
description of what you do. Then play around with
different words and styles to see how you
can present yourself, your work or your business
in different ways. And I've had such
positive feedback from students like you about this
mission statement template, but I ended up creating a
full class dedicated to it. So if you want to explore how to shape your mission statement, the different approaches you
can take, where to use it, and loads of real examples, add my 15 minute
mission statement class to your list and watch it
straight after this one. It's the perfect next step. Here's one more tip for telling your brand story in a way
that's direct and impactful. Use the active voice. The active voice describes
a sentence where the subject does the
action stated by the verb. It follows a clear subject
verb object format. That simplicity makes it easy
to read. Here's an example. The subject, the artist
is doing the action, painting, and the object, the mural is at the
end of the sentence. With the passive voice, the object becomes
the subject moves to the start of the sentence and
is acted upon by the verb. Sometimes the original subject, the doer is missing entirely. As you can see
from this example, sentences written in the
passive voice tend to sound more indirect, impersonal
and bureaucratic. Despite that, the
passive voice is surprisingly prevalent on
websites and social media, even amongst creatives
who usually want to sound anything other than
impersonal and bureaucratic. On the left are a
few examples of passive copy I found
on Amy's website. On the right are their
more active alternatives. You can see straightaway that the active version comes across as more natural and
straightforward. On the other hand,
the passive examples are more bureaucratic
and long winded. Writing more complex
sentences using the passive voice can also become really confusing
for the reader. You don't need to avoid the
passive voice altogether. Writing the occasional sentence
in the passive voice is a good way of breaking up a long piece of
copy, for example. But it's a handy general rule to stick to the active
voice whenever you can. On average, aim to make 80 to 90% of your
sentences active. If you're struggling to
get your head around the difference between the
passive and active voice, this article by Alice at
Grammarly will help you. It explains things
really clearly and gives lots of useful
detail and examples. The most important takeaway from this lesson is that the best
way to get across who you are and what you do
is to experiment with word choices until you
find your unique voice. And by using the first
person and the active voice, you can make sure
your profiles, bios, and about pages are snappy,
direct and engaging. Before we move on,
have a go creating your own mission statement using the template we
looked at earlier. You could also take a look at
your existing profiles and see if they can be improved by tweaking your word choices, switching to the first person or swapping from the passive
to the active voice. In the next lesson,
I'll share with you the secret of selling
without the sleeves. I promise you this works. So if you ever feel like
a cheesy salesperson, when you try to write
marketing copy, you can forget that
feeling right now.
4. The Secret to Selling: You feel uncomfortable writing promotional copy for your work? Perhaps you feel awkward
digging yourself up, or you're worried that
you'll come across as arrogant or like a
pushy salesperson. A lot of entrepreneurs and small business owners feel this way, especially creatives. The secret to getting past
that discomfort and writing engaging persuasive
copy is to take your focus away from yourself
and onto your reader. In other words, your
potential customer. Once you take your reader as your starting point
rather than yourself, once you make it all
about them and not you, any discomfort will evaporate. In this lesson, I'm
going to show you three simple principles that will help you
identify your reader, connect with them, and sell
to them without the sleeve. It's impossible to
write clearly and effectively if you're
at all unclear about who you're writing for or what the purpose
of your writing is. So for each piece of
copy that you write, ask yourself, who is reading this? Why
are they reading it? What's their goal, and how can I help them
get what they want? You might find it
helpful to visualize an actual person who'll
be reading your copy. So if you're writing web copy aimed at potential customers, you can imagine your typical target customer when
you're writing. This is a technique I use, and I find it a
great way to keep my copy personal and relevant. My fictional client, Amy, runs an Etsy shop called Letters B Amy, where
she sells her work. Here's the first sentence
of her shop description. Amy has already
identified her readers as existing and potential
customers of her shop, and the majority of
them are there to buy cards and gifts for
friends and family. She can help her
customers get what they want by selling a
range of appealing, unique cards and gifts. This opening gambit needs to
condense that offering into a short and snappy sentence without any irrelevant
information. It's looking pretty
good in general, but there's just one thing
that doesn't feel quite right, considering the target
reader Amy has identified. That's this reference to
brush lettering supplies. Amy does sell brushes and
inks in her Etsy shop, but it's a very small
part of her business. Most of her sales come from people buying gifts for others. That's her main target reader, and that's who she should be addressing in this
opening sentence. So let's adjust
this copy slightly so it's totally
focused on the reader. That might seem like an
obvious error to you, but it's amazing how
often people include irrelevant information just
like this in their copy. That's why it's
so important that you answer the three
questions of who, why and how to focus your
copy on what's relevant. If you need a little help identifying your target readier, this guide by fabric brands
is a great place to start. It outlines different approaches with examples from
successful brands. When you talk to someone face to face, it's a two way thing. You focus on the other person as much or more than yourself. You ask them questions
and you give them time to reply and give their
opinion on things. Replicating this conversational
approach in writing is challenging
because the person you're talking to isn't there. They're in another
place and time, so they can't join in the
conversation directly. As a result, writing, especially marketing copy,
can come across as one sided. From a reader's point of view, the conversational equivalent is being on the receiving end of a long monologue that's
delivered without any eye contact or
opportunity to reply. But there are a few
techniques you can use to get that conversational tone into your writing and make your
reader feel more involved, more as though you're
talking to them directly and more
likely to keep reading. Asking questions is a technique I use a lot in my writing. It gets people's attention, and it encourages
them to think about how what you're saying
relates to them, just like it does
in conversation. And as a writer, asking questions encourages
you to think about your reader as you
write and make sure your copy is focused on
them and their needs. Here's the next part of
Amy's Etsy shop description. There's nothing wrong
with this copy, but it does feel a
little dry and distant. The first sentence is phrased as an order
to do something, and the second sentence is
just a statement of fact. Neither of them explicitly
connects with the reader. Let's see what happens when
we keep the gist the same, but tweak the wording
a little so that the sentences are
phrased as questions. Now, we're taking the reader
as our starting point. We know that most people reading this shop bio will be
looking for a gift, and we're addressing
those gift seekers directly and specifically. Most people reading
that first question will silently answer yes. It sets a positive
tone for what follows, and it means that the
reader is more likely to answer a second yes
to the next question. Notice how, as with a lot of the techniques you'll
learn in this class, the content of what you're writing is only
slightly changed, but that small change
has had a big result. Something else has
changed in the before and after examples, and it's all about
the word, that is. In this version,
we've used to create a natural conversational tone and make the reader feel
part of what's being said. It's all about focusing on the person you're
communicating with, putting yourself in their shoes and asking them questions and involving them in
what you're saying exactly as you would if
you were talking to them. Here's the final bit of
Amy's Etsy shop description. Notice how she started both
sentences with I and how the copy is focused on her
activities and her processes. Let's switch things
around so that the focus of the copy is on
the reader, not the writer. This feels much more
engaging and relevant. And although the word
count is a little longer, it also feels more direct. That's because as a reader, I don't have to
turn each activity around to figure out
what it means for me. It's already written
from my viewpoint. Here's a real life
example from not on the High Streets website that showcases the techniques
we've just learned. This copy is very
reader focused. The words you or your appear three times
and we only once. And look at the way it uses questions to engage the reader. The most important takeaway
from this lesson is that reader focus is the foundation of all
good copywriting. Yes, it will stop
you feeling like a cheesy salesperson,
but more than that, it will lead to better
customer engagement, more sales, and
greater brand loyalty. We're going to dig
deeper into forming a connection with your
reader in later lessons. In the meantime, take a look at your existing marketing
copy and see if any of it could benefit from
greater reader focus using the tips
you've just learned. Next up, it's the first
of our two copy quickies. This one is all about
engaging the senses.
5. Engage the Senses: When we talk with someone, we don't just use words
to communicate. Our tone of voice,
facial expressions, and gestures also play a part. In fact, around 80% of
communication is non verbal. When we write, all that non verbal supporting
material is stripped out, and the words that
are left behind can seem a bit flat and dry. This is one of the
reasons why you can find someone eloquent and
interesting in person, but then read something they've written and find it very dull. One way to make our writing
more conversational and authentic is to
make it more sensory. So let's explore
the five senses. Sight sound, smell
touch and taste. And as we look at each example, inspired by Amy's print, think about how
you might draw on your reader's senses to
describe what you create. And I do appreciate
that some of these are going to be easier for some
businesses than others. For example, incorporating
smell into your writing should come easily if you create
toiletries or scented candles, but it's going to be
less straightforward if you're an
illustrator like Amy. So don't worry if you find
some of these difficult. Just have a go and be a bit playful and
experimental with it. In this copy, we're emphasizing the visual
elements of the print. We're doing this in two ways. Firstly, by using the
words you can see, and they look like
and more subtly, by using the visual
nouns, opacity and tone. Sound is more challenging. After all, the print
itself is silent. But here are a couple
of ways we can appeal to auditory readers
in our product copy. And isn't this more vibrant
than if we just said, I like minimalist prints, and your friend will
like this gift. The sense of touch is a
great one to evoke when you're creating anything
with a luxurious element. Even though we're just
talking about paper here, we've made it sound really
looks and inviting. And although our print doesn't actually smell of anything much, bringing the sense
of smell into things here reinforces the
point we're making. Finally, here we're connecting the print to an activity
that involves taste, another subtle way to
bring an extra sense into our reader's
experience of our copy. For an extra slice
of inspiration, take a look at this
description of a body butter on
Grace Cole's website, unctuous, rich, luxurious,
moorish, thick, smooth. The description
really hammers home the luxury element
of the product with lots of sensory language. Take another look
at your own copy. Would it benefit from
some more sensory input? In the next lesson,
we'll look at the specifics of writing
product descriptions.
6. Writing Product Descriptions: In this lesson, we'll explore some principles for describing
your work in a way that's accurate and
authentic and that's going to persuade potential
customers to buy. Like many creatives,
Amy often feels uncomfortable
describing her work in product descriptions
and elsewhere. She's afraid of sounding
too salesy or inauthentic. And because her art
is very visual, she sometimes struggles
with what to put in her product descriptions
because she feels like her work
speaks for itself. Amy has just finished working
on a simple digital print, which she's going to
sell in her Etsy shop. We're going to work through a short and simple
product description for this print using three powerful
copywriting techniques that will help Amy describe
her work and sell it. Linking features to
benefits is one of the most powerful copywriting
techniques in existence. A feature is a fact about
a product or service, while a benefit explains
what's in it for the customer. Benefits sell your product
or service because they connect with your
reader's desires and emotions, but you also need
features to help customers justify
their purchase. So starting with a feature, then explaining the
benefit of that feature is a foolproof way to appeal to both the head and the
heart of your reader. Features are generally easy
to identify and describe. Benefits need a bit more work, which is why a lot
of people don't include them in their
product descriptions, but they're so important, especially when you're
selling art, jewelry, or craft items, because people usually buy these with their hearts rather than their heads. When I'm writing
about a product, I like to start by
listing the features, the basic dry facts about it. Then I imagine I'm telling a potential customer
those facts, and they're asking
me the question, so what in response. My answer to the question, so
what gives me the benefit. I'll use Amy's new print as
an example. Here's a feature. The fact that the
words say fortune favors the brave. Well, so what? What is the benefit
to the customer of having a print of those
words in particular? Well, it's a source
of encouragement. It's something you
can have in your home to remind you to be
brave every day. And let's not forget Amy's
key target audience, which we know from
our earlier lesson, is people buying
gifts for others. This print would make
a really thoughtful gift for a shy friend. Let's add that in. Let's
pick another key feature. The fact that the
quote is printed using archival inks onto high quality 300 GSM
Tintoretto gesso paper. Well, that certainly
sounds impressive. But what does it actually mean? Not much, in fact, to someone who isn't
an artist themselves. But I've done my research, and I've found lots
of benefits to both the ink and the paper that may have been
obvious to Amy, but as a layman, I had no idea what all those
fancy words meant. And that's really important. You might feel a
bit silly asking, so what about features of your creations when the
answer feels obvious to you, but those benefits might not
be obvious to your audience. Instead of hoping they work
it out for themselves, you need to do the
work for them. Notice also how I'm
addressing the reader, the potential customer as you even during this
working out phase. This is such a good
habit to get into. It's just another
handy way to keep your focus on the reader and seeing things from
their viewpoint. Another way of drawing out
both the features and benefits of a product is to overcome
potential objections. Once again, the trick is to put yourself in your reader's
shoes, but this time, you need to ask yourself
why a potential customer might decide not to buy
your product or service. There are two phrases I find
helpful when doing this. I'm interested, and
that's okay because. So Amy's potential buyer
might say, I'm interested, but I hate all the plastic
packaging most gifts come wrapped in to
which we can reply, that's okay because
it's packaged in an eco friendly
protective sleeve with no unnecessary packaging. And instead of leaving it there, we can go back in and ask, so what in response to that feature and draw
out the benefit. Having a conversation with your imaginary reader like this is a really effective
way to draw out potential
objections and overcome them in your copy to
prompt the reader to buy. There's something else
going on here, too. By choosing to mention environmental awareness and the care we take when
packaging our work, we're also appealing
to our readers values. When a reader who shares
these values reads this copy, they're more likely to trust
us and feel a connection. That doesn't just mean they're more likely to buy something. It's great for ongoing
brand loyalty, too. Let's tidy up these features
and benefits and condense them into a short product
description for Amy's print. And here's another
real world example, courtesy of Amanda Westbury, a ceramicist who sells
her creations of Foxy. Notice how Amanda has
given suggestions for how a pendant
might be worn or used, the way she's explained why
the cord is the length it is and how she explains the reasons for the
different colors. All these techniques
help the reader understand the product
and imagine owning it. The next tip takes seconds
to explain and demonstrate, but it's so powerful. And no surprise, it's got to do with focusing on
your reader again. Look again at our
product description. Notice how I've referred to your print on two
occasions in the text. Talking to a
prospective customer as if they already
own the product, is an age old sales technique. And the reason it's so
popular is that it works. When you give ownership of
the product to your reader, it sounds like a done deal. You've assumed that
they're going to buy, and that confidence
rubs off on them. Referring to your print
or whatever it is, like I have here, is probably the most direct
way of doing that. Another more subtle
method is to ask your reader to imagine
interacting with the product. For example, we might say, you'll feel inspired
every morning when you see this print or imagine your friend's face when they unwrap this
thoughtful gift. In this lesson, you've
learned how linking features to benefits,
handling objections, and giving your reader ownership of your product can help you write a product description that's both authentic
and accurate. Before you move on, take a look at a product description
of your own. Ask the question, so what to identify if there are
any benefits you can add in for your reader
and experiment with ownership to
engage their emotions. And make sure you check
out this brilliant article by HenakO at
Enchanting Marketing. It's all about features
and benefits and how to use them to
connect with your reader. In the next lesson, I'll share with you a
tried and tested versatile copywriting
template that you can use for everything from product
descriptions and landing pages to social media posts.
7. Copywriting Formula: Flowing a tried and
tested formula when you're writing marketing copy is a really good way to
make sure you stay focused and don't forget
anything important. The formula I recommend most often to my clients
and students is AIDA. That's because
it's really simple to follow and it's
very versatile. You can adapt it to work for product descriptions,
landing pages, social media posts,
advertisements, pretty much any marketing
copy you can think of. ADA stands for attention
interest, desire action, four stages that lead you through grabbing your
reader's attention, then getting them interested to making them want
what you're offering, and finally persuading
them to take action. These four stages are often illustrated using a
funnel shape like this. That's because you inevitably lose readers at
different stages. So you might grab the
attention of 100 people, but they drop off at each stage, and perhaps only five of them end up taking the
action at the end. Let's work through the
ADA formula together, using a promotional
flyer as our example. Amy is going to use this to promote her brush
lettering workshop. You can see I've already
sketched out how we're going to apply the ADA
model to the flyer. We're going to use
the headline and the subheading to grab
the reader's attention. You might also hear
this stage referred to as the hook because it's
what hooks the reader in. In this first paragraph, we'll create interest
in the workshop, and we'll turn that interest into desire in the
second paragraph. Then in the final paragraph, we'll explain the action we want the reader to take and
encourage them to take it. This stage is often
referred to as a call to action or CTA. From a copywriting
point of view, grabbing a reader's
attention or hooking them in is most often done using
a headline or a title. In this case, it's the heading and subheading at the
top of the flyer. In the case of a
webpage or blog post, it's the title, and in
a social media post, it's the first line. The principle is
always the same. You need to get your reader's
attention at the start of your copy and encourage
them to keep reading. In the case of our flyer, I'm going to keep this
big headline at the top very short and simple,
just as it is now, so that we can use
nice big texts that people are going to notice as they're browsing
through a pile of flyers or looking
at a notice board. Anyone who is remotely
interested in attending a hand lettering
workshop is going to have their attention
grabbed by those words. Now we can use the
subtitle to keep their attention
and make sure they pick up the flyer
and keep reading. When it comes to grabbing
attention with your copy, a great place to start by
focusing on one of your product or services at unique
selling points or USPs. In the case of Amy's workshop, a big selling point is that the teacher is a
professional illustrator. Let's start with that
basic information. And now I'm going to show
you a handy little tool for improving headlines. It's called Headline Analyzer. It's a free service
that analyzes your headlines and gives you
tips for improving them. I find it useful not just for traditional headlines
and blog titles, but any short snippet of
copy I'm writing where I'm looking to grab the attention
of potential customers, just like with this flyer. Let's see what Headline Analyzer thinks of our subheading. You can see that it's suggesting we add some words
that are either uncommon or emotional or
what it calls power words. It's also suggesting that we rephrase the headline
as a question, which is something we covered in an earlier lesson.
The sentiment? Well, it would be good if
it was positive so that we could get people into a positive
mood to make a purchase. Let's take that
feedback on board and rewrite our subheading
with the same information, but rephrasing it
as a question and adding the more emotional
and positive words, W, beautiful, and professional. What do you think? I
think this version is much more attention
grabbing and engaging, and the Headline Analyzer tool agrees. Try it for yourself. There's a bit of trial
and error needed, and it's not perfect, but it's a handy resource to have
in your back pocket. Now it's time to build
interest in the workshop, and for that, I'm going
back to those USPs. I want to mention that the
workshop is casual and friendly because
I think that will give people the
confidence to book it. I also want folk
to know that it's hands on and practical
as opposed to being about the theory of hand lettering so that
they know what to expect. And I want to introduce Amy
as the host by name, again, to make her seem friendly
and approachable and also to reiterate that she's a
professional illustrator. We've got across a lot of important information in
that short paragraph, and hopefully our reader is now interested in the workshop. Next, for the desire stage, to push them over the edge into really wanting to book
onto the workshop. I'm going to zoom in on the final and most
persuasive USP. That's the fact that
during this workshop, attendees will create a work
of art of their own using the brush lettering
techniques they'll learn. I'm going
to tell them that. Can you guess what I'm going
to do next? That's right. I'm going to use the
technique we learned in the last lesson and
link a benefit to that feature by
offering suggestions to the reader about how they
might use their new artwork. Yourself in the shoes of
someone interested in this workshop and
reading this sentence. I bet you're imagining proudly hanging your beautiful
new artwork in your home or watching a close friend unwrap their
lovingly handmade gift. We've injected some
emotion into things, and that's what will
take our reader from being interested in the workshop to unequivocally
wanting to book it. So now it's time to let
them know what action they need to do to book
onto the workshop. Whatever it is you're writing, make this action as
simple as possible. Don't confuse your reader by including any more
information than needed. The only tiny extra word I'm going to pop in here
is the word securely, just as a note of reassurance. So here's our finish flyer
created using the Ada formula. The most important takeaway from this lesson
is that following a copywriting formula is a foolproof shortcut to
writing effective copy. That's why formulas like AIDA are used by professional
copywriters. They've been proven to work. So before you move
on, see if you can apply the AIDA formula
to your own copy. Remember, you can adapt it for pretty much any marketing copy. Try it on a product description or your next social media post. In the next lesson, you'll learn three powerful hacks for keeping your copy clear and concise, something that's so important in this age of limited
attention spans.
8. Hacks for Crystal Clear Copy: Clarity and directness are so important in marketing copy, especially when that
copy appears online. Your message needs to be clear and you need
to get to the point quickly if you're going to keep their attention and persuade
them to take action. In this lesson, we'll cover
three very straightforward, but surprisingly
powerful hacks for keeping your copy
clear and concise. Long rambling sentences over around 20 words are a
feature of bad writing. They're confusing and
they're difficult to read, especially online where
readers tend to scroll and skim through text rather
than reading every word. Splitting your sentences can dramatically improve your copy. Here is an intro to a blog post Amy is writing about
brush lettering. The first sentence is fine, but this second one is
mammoth over 80 words long. It's got all the hallmarks of a rambling over long sentence, lots of those connecting
words and lots of commas. Let's split this sentence
into shorter ones. I'm going to start
by adding full stops at natural points between ideas. These are easy to spot
because they're usually flagged up by those
connecting words or commas. Now I need to reframe
the sentences slightly so they make sense and follow
nicely on from each other. And especially as this
text will appear online, I'm going to split not
just the sentences, but the paragraphs to make it easier on the eye as
well as easier to read. Simple straightforward
changes that have made this piece of copy clearer
and more inviting. If you only take one thing
away from this class, let it be to always write
with your reader in mind. It's a theme you'll find cropping up time and
again in my classes, and it's the best
advice I can give you to make your writing
clear and relevant. This golden rule also applies to the individual words
you use in your copy. Keep your language simple. Every career or
industry or hobby has its own insider
language or jargon, specialist language
that people working or operating within that
field use and understand. If you're writing for people within that
specialist group, it's appropriate to use
that specialist language. But don't make the
mistake of using industry jargon when you're writing for a more
general audience. That's a mistake Amy has
made in her blog post intro. You know what a Shuji is? Well, it's some sort of
Japanese calligraphy, but I bet not many of
Amy's target readers who are beginners at brush
lettering would know that. Let's swap that word for
one they will recognize. If you're writing about
something you know very well and you're not sure if a
word is jargon or not, the best way to find out is to ask someone outside
the industry. I'm sure if Amy
had asked any non professional if they
knew what Shuji was, they would have told
her that they didn't. It's not just jargon words you need to eliminate
from your writing. Language tip number
two is don't use complicated words when
there's a simple alternative. You might think that using
a fancy sounding word makes you seem like
a better writer, but in fact, the
opposite is true. So let's swap these
complex words in Amy's copy for simpler ones. Sperate becomes different,
onerous becomes difficult, and Shepherd becomes guide. Next up, adverbs. Plus simply an adverb
modifies a verb or an adjective to tell you
how someone did something. I've highlighted the
adverbs in these sentences. Adverbs aren't always bad news. Sometimes they give
vital information, but they're often overused. And if you struggle to
keep your copy concise, trashing a few adverbs is
probably going to improve it. There are a few different
types of adverbs, but the type that
it's most important to check and consider
deleting are easily identified because they almost always end
in the letters LY. I've highlighted all of the LY adverbs in Amy's
text. Have a look at them. Remember what I said about
adverbs and modifying the word after it to tell
you how something was done. Let's go through them and see if they really
need to be there. First we have the word
readily before available. Is that adding anything to the meaning of the
copy? I don't think so. Let's delete it. The same goes for extremely
in front of complex. It's not bringing anything
new to the party, and the copy is clearer
and snappier without it. Now we have this
phrase very useful. This is a good example
of where we can strengthen the
verb, in this case, useful, and in doing so, make the adverb that comes
before it unnecessary. So what's the stronger
word for useful? How about invaluable? With that nice strong
verb in place, we can get rid of the adverb
without losing any meaning. Getting rid of those
adverbs was easy, and it's made this copy feel much more direct
and professional. You'll find another example of these techniques in action in this blog post by Mia
at She Dreams All Day, short sentences,
simple language, and a few adverbs. Mia gets her message
across crystal clear. Incidentally, I
thought you might like this blog post because
of the content, too. It's all about building a blog, finding your niche, and creating posts that people actually read. Mia breaks down how to pick
a focus, stay consistent, and grow an audience
in a way that feels manageable rather
than overwhelming. If you're looking for a
free tool to help you implement the tips we've
covered in this lesson, I can highly
recommend Hemingway. Copy and paste your
writing into Hemingway, and it will highlight long and difficult to read sentences, give you alternatives to complicated words and flag up adverbs. And that's not all. It helps you with a number of
other elements of writing, some of which will be familiar
from earlier lessons, like identifying the
passive voice, for example. I can't recommend
Hemingway highly enough. It's my number one resource
for anyone wanting to make their writing
clearer and more concise. The most important takeaway
from this lesson is that by shortening your sentences,
simplifying your language, and binning a few adverbs, you can quickly and easily
take a piece of copy from almost unreadable to clear,
concise and engaging. Before you move on, have a look at your own copy
and see if it can benefit from any
of the techniques we've explored in this lesson. The next lesson is the
second of our copy quickies, and it's all about writing
to optimize your pages, posts, and products
in search engines.
9. SEO Copywriting: SEO stands for search
engine optimization, simply put it means
creating content that will rank
highly in searches. And it's not just about getting your website to rank
highly on Google searches. SEO is relevant
wherever people search. So if you sell products
on Etsy, for example, you can use SEO techniques
to help those products rank highly when someone searches for that kind of thing on Etsy. SEO is often overlooked
by small business owners. I think that's partly
because there are a lot of companies charging a lot
of money for SEO services, and they make it sound
like something very technical and a little
bit mysterious. SEO also has a reputation as being slightly dodgy
and even immoral, which is largely undeserved. There's absolutely nothing
wrong with, for example, describing your product in an accurate and
detailed way so that they show up on the searches of people who are looking
for that sort of product. So SEO is something
that deserves a little of your attention and for
two very good reasons. The first reason is because
where your website, product or service ranks in search results has a
huge impact on sales. And the second reason
is because there are simple steps you can
take yourself for free to optimize your content for search engines that won't take much extra time and that will help your
content rank higher. Now, SEO copywriting is
just one part of SEO, and it's a huge subject
in its own right, so we don't have time to go
in depth in this quickie. But the most important
thing for you to know, and it's good news is that the best way to
write in a way that will rank highly in
searches is to write clear, concise, useful, reader
focused content. Well, that might sound
familiar because it's all the things I've
been encouraging you to do throughout this class, which means that if you follow the techniques you've
learned today, you'll be well on your way to creating optimized
high ranking content because good copywriting is
also good SEO copywriting. And for a more comprehensive
look at the subject of SEO, check out my dedicated
Skillshare class. If you enjoy my teaching
style and you want to learn more about how to optimize
your copy for search, it's the natural next step
in your marketing journey. I can also highly
recommend Yoast SEO blog. They've got a series of
beginners guides that demystify SEO and break it
down into easy to follow tips. The next lesson is about
writing for social media, and it is packed with
tips and tricks to improve your social
bios and posts.
10. Writing for Social Media: In this lesson, I'll touch on a few fundamental principles that apply to writing for
all social media platforms. In many ways, writing
for social is similar to writing for any other
marketing channel for your creative business. You need to be clear
on your audience, your brand voice,
and your objective. But on social media, these
things are even more vital, and that's because of
the way people consume your social content compared to other marketing channels
like your website, emails, or direct mail. Most of us access social
media on our phones, and we fly through our feeds, half distracted, not even registering a lot
of what's there. When you write for social, you're writing for these
casual scrollers and skimmers, not highly engaged readers. You've got to stand
out on a crowded feed, and any uncertainty on your part will result in a less
than punchy post, one that your target is
going to skim right past. If there's one principle that's central to great copywriting, and I think you know what
I'm going to say next, is to always write with
your reader in mind. This is even more important
when you're writing for social because
you're writing for that barely engaged audience. Unless your followers already care deeply about your work, they're not going to stop scrolling to read
a post about it. What will stop them in
their tracks is a post that's about them and that
addresses their problems, their needs, and their desires. So one simple way you can make sure your
copy is staying well and truly focused on your reader is by addressing them directly. Forrester is a company
that helps B to C brands, including creative businesses, provide better customer service. It's a slightly dry subject. But scroll through their feed, and you can see that they
are crystal clear on who their target audience is
and what those people need. One way they get their
target audiences attention is by addressing them
directly in their posts, IT and business leaders, sales ops leaders,
B to C marketers. If you work in one
of those roles, you're going to stop scrolling when you see it on your feed. And if the post goes on to address a problem
or need you have, like understanding
customer behaviors, there's a good chance you're
going to engage with it. Here's a draft social post
Amy has written where she's promoting her hand
lettering workshops. Let's switch around
the first part, so we're addressing the
target audience directly. That's much more likely
to catch their attention. Writing on social
media tends to be more casual than in other sorts
of business communication. That's mainly because people use social media to
connect with friends, socialize, catch up on the news, and for a whole host of other
non work related things. So a more informal, less business like tone is
expected and appropriate. Another reason is that space is at a premium on social media. You have to get
your message across quickly if it's going
to be effective and using abbreviations and breaking a few grammar rules are useful and acceptable
ways to achieve that. The other thing you'll
need to keep in mind when choosing how casual to go on social is your
brand tone of voice. Your brand voice should
be consistent and recognizable across all
your marketing channels. Achieving that is about choosing the right language to
reflect your brand. Look at this tweet by Forrester. If their brand voice
was more formal, they could have avoided
the contraction, don't and instead use
the more formal, do not. Or for a more
casual brand voice, they could have chosen
more informal synonyms in place of advanced
and emerging. There's no right or wrong here. It's just about reflecting your brand effectively
and being consistent. If we go back to Amy's
post to fit in with the channel and Amy's own
voice more authentically, it would be good to make the language a
little more casual. I'm going to do that by
adding a few contractions and replacing these words with
some more colloquial synonyms. For your social media
copywriting to be successful, you need to have clear
objectives in mind. When it comes to your
social activity generally, you probably have a number of objectives around
engagement levels, click throughs and conversions. So assuming that overall
strategy is clear, the next thing is to
make sure you have one simple defined
objective for each post. Your objective will probably be linked to a call to action, a CTA, but not always. Sometimes the objective
of a post is just to make followers aware of something or remind them of a key message. But usually you want them to do something like click
through to a landing page, buy a product, or
engage with the post by liking or commenting.
Here's the important thing. A post should only ever
have one call to action. Remember those skimmers
and scrollers and remember the limited time and space you have to get
your message across. Unless you're absolutely
clear what one action you want your reader to take after reading your post, your message can come across as confused and will
often be ignored. This is such a simple thing. It takes seconds to
decide your posts subjective and
craft a simple CTA, and yet so many
people get it wrong. Don't be one of them. Look
at Forrester's feed again, register now, download
now, learn more. Now, it may well
be that there are extra CTAs once I
click through here, which are going to
encourage me further down Forrester's
marketing funnel, but the CTA attached to each post is singular
and straightforward. Amy can learn
something here, too. She's confusing her reader
with too many options. She needs to focus on one
CTA, which in this case, should be getting people
to book onto the workshop, and she needs to give them one clear instruction
of how to do it. Adding a link here
will make it quick and easy for the reader to
click through and book. The most important takeaway from this lesson is that while writing copy for
social has a lot in common with writing
other marketing copy, people consume it differently. Because people skim
and scroll on social, you need to build
solid foundations for social media success by
knowing your audience, using more casual language, and by sticking to one
simple CTA per post. I want to show you
a super handy tool now from Sprout Social. Firstly, there's a
guide that tells you the optimum length for all the major social media platforms. Secondly, there's the tool
itself where you can paste your post and get feedback on its length and
number of hash tags. And if you're interested
in learning more about copywriting
for social media, take a look at my social media
copywriting master class. It's full of tips and tricks for writing your profiles, bios, and posts with advice tailored to each of
the main platforms. Before you move on,
take a close look at your last few social media
posts and see if they can be improved using the tips
we've explored in this lesson. In the next lesson, I'll share some common mistakes I
see people make when writing copy for their
creative business and how you can avoid them.
11. Common Mistakes: In this lesson, I'll share some common mistakes
I see people make when writing for their
creative businesses and how you can avoid them. Nobody wants to come across
as rude or abrupt or curt. And that's one of the
reasons why we so often clog up and slow
down our writing by adding fussy polite words
and phrases that don't need to be there instead of getting straight
to the point. In fact, the politest thing we can do from our
readers point of view is get our message across
as succinctly as possible, rather than wasting their
time because that's rude. So write confidently
and don't be afraid to give
direct instructions. Let's look at a few examples. I'm sure you recognize
a few of these from official letters you've received or from old fashioned web pages. Isn't it better
when people get to the point and say
exactly what they mean? Just as using jargon words, where every day once will do doesn't make you look clever. Neither does using more
words than you need. It just makes your
writing fussy, long winded and
difficult to read. If you need a hand making
your writing straightforward, try the readability
Test tour by Webfx. There are loads of different
readability indices and stats to look at,
but quite simply, if you aim for
this little bar on the test results to turn green, you'll end up with
clear simple text that most adult readers
will understand. Most of us have a
tendency to frame information negatively in our
minds. It's human nature. It dates all the way back
to when we were living in caves and avoiding a
sabretoth tiger on the way to the river was a more important
consideration than enjoying a lovely swim
when we got there. Naturally, this tendency
to frame things negatively gets carried
over into our writing. However, research has shown that framing products
and services in a positive way increases conversions by as much as 50%. So being more positive in your copy makes good
business sense. Here are some examples of what I mean by positive and
negative framing. In the examples on the left, we're talking about
avoiding negative things. Meanwhile, on the right,
we're saying the same things, but we've reframed
the information, so that we're focusing
on the positive. We're telling the customer
about the positive thing that will happen rather than the
bad thing they'll avoid. A parcel not getting
broken in the post means exactly the same as it arriving in
perfect condition, but the positive framing creates a much more positive image
in the reader's mind. Do you think that the
positively framed alternatives are also a little
more direct? I do. And as an extra bonus, I find it easier to link
features to benefit when I also make an effort
to keep my copy positive. To spot negative
framing in your copy, look out for negative words
like no, not won't never. And negative qualities,
in this case, we've got long,
broken and tarnish. Once you're looking out
for negative framing, it's pretty easy to spot, then it's just a
case of turning it around so that you're
focusing on the opposite, positive quality or consequence. Many of us learn to write in a very correct formal style
at school or college. It's a way of writing
that suits academic work, but it can come across
as stilted and stuffy in other contexts,
especially online ones. A lot of rules around writing are important because they aid clarity and make sure you get your message across effectively. But certain rules are outdated, and breaking them
can actually make your writing clearer as
well as more character for. One example of a grammar rule, it's okay to break
is never to start a sentence with but or B or and. You should absolutely
break this rule because shorter sentences
are easier to read. They add energy to your writing, and they often add clarity, too. Here's an example of that in
action on Etsy's homepage. Your privacy is the
highest priority of our dedicated team, and if you ever need assistance, we're always ready to
step in for support. To the reader, it's clear
that each of these sentences represents a separate,
equally important idea. If we got rid of the word and to please the grammar
pedants like this, the reader would assume
that the second sentence was building on the idea
presented in the first, which it isn't, so that
would be confusing. Merging the sentences
like this is also grammatically correct,
but that's no good either. Not only is this single sentence so long that it's
difficult to read, the importance of that
second statement has been lost by tagging it onto
the end of the previous one. There are a few
other grammar rules it's okay to break occasionally. Not using broken sentences
is one and making all your paragraphs 3-5
sentences long is another. I don't even know who
started that one, but it's surprisingly prevalent. The only rule you
should never break when writing marketing
copy is simple, write with your reader in mind. But you already knew
that, didn't you? In this lesson, you've learned
three of the big mistakes my creative clients make when they're writing copy
for their business, not getting to the
point, framing their message negatively, and blindly following
outdated writing rules. Before you move
on, take a look at your own copy and see if you
can make any improvements by spotting where you've
been guilty of making these mistakes and correcting them using the tips
you've just learned. In the next lesson,
we'll recap what we've learned and talk
about our class project. I've also got one fine brilliant
free resource for you, so don't even think
about skipping it.
12. Next Steps: Thank you for choosing this
class, and congratulations. You've just learned practical techniques you can start using straightaway to
improve your copy and grow your creative business. Now it's time to put
what you've learned into action with
your class project. Pick a few pieces of existing
copy from your website, a product listing and a
social post or ideal. Download the quick sheet from the class description and use it to improve your
copy line by line. When you're done,
share your strongest example is your project. I'd love to see how you've applied the techniques
from this class. If you found this class helpful, please take a moment
and leave a review. Your feedback helps me
improve future classes and helps other students find classes that will suit
their learning needs. Speaking of helpful, I promised you one
more free resource. Here it is dictionary.com. It's grown into an all
round writing tool. Alongside definitions, you'll find trending
words, quizzes, and useful sub dictionaries, including ones for
slang, images, and terms related to
gender and sexuality. Its sister site, thesaurus.com, lets you test synonyms
in real sentences, which is a fast way to
upgrade bland wording. Now, what would you
like to learn next? If you're looking to define your creative brand with
clarity and confidence, my 15 minute mission
statement and tagline classes are
the perfect next step. In just minutes, you can shape a mission statement that
anchors your business and craft a focused tagline that strengthens every piece
of marketing you create. Together, they
give you a simple, structured way to articulate what you do and why it matters. Or if you're ready to supercharge
your social media copy, my social media
copywriting master class covers everything from crafting a professional bio to time saving techniques for
writing persuasive posts. It's my most popular
class on Skillshare, and I update it annually to make sure you've got
the most relevant, timely advice for each platform. And if you're looking to
hone a specific skill, whether that's
crafting punchy ads, making your content
more SEO friendly or finnessing your writing style and tone, I've got you covered. Visit my profile page to
see my full collection of copywriting classes and hit follow for updates on new ones. Thank you again for
learning with me. I'm excited to see how you use what you've
learned today to boost your marketing content and grow your creative business.