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1. Introduction to Writing Detective Fiction for Beginners: Hello and welcome to your
detective story writing course. Detective stories or a sub genre that have
created many icons in literature and film all over the world over the
past 100 years, there are characters
who are charmed their readers with their keen intellect, the sharp widths, and determined personality, mysteries they
encounter and credibly investing to a degree
that readers try to work out ministry alongside
the main character. Detective stories or mystery
novels just like any other during the reader to
predict what happens next, We'll stay trapped in suspense. It's one of my
favorite genres and most likely one
of yours as well. Over the years I've written
hundreds of stories, researched many writers,
and taught several courses. I've taken what I learned
on this sub-genre and condensed it into this one
course for beginner writers. In this course, I'll cover
all the important elements of detective fiction and
Omnia with the tools to create your own with a
license on phrases and mannerisms to the comparisons between the realistic
and cliche detector. Two important facts
regarding crime scenes, the police system
and the legal system that can help you build
a more realistic story. As an added bonus, I am an active instructor, which means I'm here every day ready to answer your questions, review your writing, and assist you in writing your
detective story. This is not just
a writing course to help you get started, but also the opportunity
to join one of the biggest rotting
communities on the platform. And I look forward to seeing
you in the discussions. On that note. I'll see you in the
very first lesson. For now.
2. Standalone or Series?: Hello and welcome to
your writing course. In this lesson, I'm
going to be talking about a very important
question at all. Rogers consider when
they start rotting, or they're going to be
writing a standalone novel, or are they going to
be writing a series? This is a question I also want you to think on as
I'm going to be discussing the pros and cons of writing a
standalone novel, series or series of
standalone novels. Now what I mean by a series, a standalone novels is
that it is a series that has separate stories but
a common main character. There are many famous ulcers
which I've done this, such as salts are kinda Doyle with a
Sherlock Holmes series, which is a series of stories, but they will separate it. Only common factor
being Sherlock and Watson and perhaps a few
other secondary characters. Then we have Agatha Christie, who's written many different
series of standalone novels. Different detectors. One of the most famous
being Hercules arrow. These have been
standalone novels, but at the same time, common factor between main
character, the detect. However, it is becoming
the norm for fiction today to have a series of novels which has each and open ending or loose and z will be dealt
with in the next null. And it's only really a conclusive ending
in a final novel. For example, rotis, we'd
like to have their villains resurface all their characters only change of a
series of novels. And thus, it is really
just one long novel that's being broken up
into separate events. If that explained,
let me discuss the pros and cons of each. Starting with standalone novels. A single standalone novel is
a novel that doesn't require any additional reading before the first page or
after the last page. You can pick up the book and start reading without
worrying about missing information or
references to another book. This is one of the biggest
pros of a standalone novel. You don't need to plan out a wandering story that takes
several books to tell. Your story is one book
for the reader to enjoy, and it makes your preparation
much easier as well. The other pro of a standalone
novel is that you can put all your focus on that
level or you're planning, you're practicing and
effort goes into one book. Now while it may not
always be the case, this increases the chance
of Latina quality novel, you can be proud off. Finally, and perhaps a sort
of pseudo benefit is that you can continue your novel if
you want to start a series. Sometimes you don't know if you'll first novel is
going to be so great that you want to stick
with it through several books that
sometimes it is. And when it comes to a
single standalone novel, you can create a series
of standalone levels, much like the Sherlock
Holmes series. This always that
to fall back on. You don't have to create
a story that goes through several novels when
you can create a series of different stories. Now when it comes to
a series of novels, with each book is
interconnected, the pros are very
much different. First, it is a
well-known fact in the writing community that no matter what genre
you're writing, a series of novels gets
more attention than a standalone series has a greater fan base
as each novel and a series ups the
dedication of your fans. Of course, that means that your later books will
have less readers. But the criteria series
will still increase the number of people
attracted to a books. So it kind of balances out. Of course, if it is more popular and they
are more novels, a series, it to be a more
lucrative option as well. This applies to a series
of stand-alones as well. Second pro is that a series of connected novels might
require more work, but they often have better
develop characters. As you will need to
explore many sides of their personalities
and their histories. Well-rounded characters
are always fun to read. Finally, a series allows for more freedom with the
construction of your plot. With a stand-alone,
you start to novel knowing how it begins
and how it ends. But when starting a series, in most routers have no idea what will happen in
the final novel. Show. They may have some ideas, but they don't restrict
themselves as to what will happen
in a future novel. As details may
change depending on how the story flows and
their current novel. Now when you are
deciding to write a standalone or a
series of novels, it also pays to consider
your target market, erotic, and create a series of
novels in any genre, and it could turn out
to be very popular. However, there are some
genres which are better suited for writing a
series than others. For more serious and
dramatic fiction, it helps to have a stand-alone for the reader to be focused on. However, for more
lighthearted or epic tales, a series is more
beneficial if you are happy with having adults as your target
audience, for example, and Hakim and on
writing a series, then this is not only a
great road to go down, but one that I
personally recommend. It gives you the opportunity
to rot more stories, play with new characters, and give you a better
chance of rotting proficiently if you are
interested in doing so. If you're writing a
single standalone novels, you still have this opportunity as that gives you
plenty of time as well to do some experimentation through redraft and
through editing. You might have new ideas
along the way which can change the very ending
that you have in mind. With that said, you don't have as much
freedom as a series, but that isn't just say
that your CR restricted by having a standalone
single novel. Now to conclude this
video as well with mini videos in this series is I want to finish off by separating my professional advice
from my personal opinion. I like to provide you for the professional information in the beginning and
right till the end. But at the end I wanted to give you what are
personally would do. This will help give
you some insight into, I don't know, the rotis mindset. What I would do in a situation could differ
from what you would do. But it will also give you
ideas if you are struggling. Now, when I'm deciding
whether to rot a series and not
at Assad to wait. And Tom, halfway through
writing my first book, by that point, I have an excellent idea of my
characters and the world. It is easier for me
to decide if I wanted to write more stories
with these characters. I might even come up with a few ideas for different
stories while our route. This may not work for you, especially if you'd like
to plan thoroughly. But if you find yourself
unable to decide, Trump putting the
question at the back of your mind and just
start writing instead. It's great to
answer the question right at the start of
your planning process. But it's not the end
of the world if you only answer it when
you are busy rotting. And that brings us to the
end of this first lesson. For your exercise.
In this lesson, I want you to imagine your
characters and your story. Could you see it
turning out to be a long winding series
with several novels. Perhaps you see your
characters being so appealing that they could
inspire several stand-alones. Is your story and characters perfectly created for a
single standalone novel. And you're gonna
stick with that. Just imagine what you
would see your characters doing beyond the story
that you have in mind. And if you can't
really imagine it, and perhaps a single novel
is best suited for you. In the next lesson, we'll be
discussing the comparisons between a realistic detective
and a cliche detective, which top of personality or detective character is best
suited for your story. I'll see you then. Bye for now.
3. Realistic Detective vs Cliche Detective: Hello and welcome to your
detective story writing course. In this lesson, we are
going to be discussing the realistic detector
and the cliche detected, the pros and cons of each. First, let's start with
the cliche, detective. And that's more fun
and ridiculous. What I might be
wrong in assuming the cliche detective
can't be realistic. I'm simply referring to
the top of detective that has its own version
of Pulp Fiction. The suave ladies man sitting in a smoky room wondering
why everything is in grayscale until he is blinded by the next sock focus damsel in distress
with legs for Miles, who comes bolting in
through their office door. The cliche detective
is old-fashioned, but it's certainly still holds a place on the
shelves to this day. Now the cliche detective
doesn't have to be a man. In fact, it is probably
best to describe the depreciate detective
as the superhero genre. Cliche will wear a trench
coat and a fedora, smoke profusely, drink into
the not in some jazzy bar. And dish on one line is whenever they get
the chance to speak. Great examples of this cliche. Detective, **** Tracy, an
actual comic book character, and Sam Spade, the
protagonist of the classic detective
novel, The Maltese Falcon. All these detectives
have traits that are synonymous with
being a detective. It's a reason that when
we picture a detective, We can't help it picture these
icons and detective genre. We see them with
their trench coats and their 1950s is static. Walking the streets. Mentally monologue in as they try to piece all
the clues together. Meanwhile, they're also
battling some inner turmoil and pondering or relationship
with the victim who knows. These tropes work well within
a noir detective story. It work well today. The underlined the
darkness of man, which is what Nora is all about. If any of these details
appeals to you, whether it be the fashion since mannerisms,
the atmosphere, these detectives
reveling, then perhaps a cliche detective might work in your novel better than
a realistic detected. Speaking of which, let's
discuss that top of detective and what makes
them so realistic? The realistic detective
is overworked, working three cases
at once instead of the odd case that
crosses their desk. These are most likely
police detectives or even private investigators who have their own problems,
their own dramas. These are detectives
who will most likely keep their professional life
separate from their work. No matter how handsome, old, pretty a suspect may be. They are simply
trying to get through the week and hopefully
get some sleep. These kinds of detectives
have their own Trump. First, these kinds of
detectives are immediately more relatable while still allowing
that feeling of escapism. Anyone who has been swamped
with work understands the strengths and pains at
detective constantly faces, the boredom of asking
mundane questions, the mountains of paperwork that are involved in certain cases, a commonplace in the laugh
of a real detective. Now these two types of detectors do have
some similarities. They all ask questions, they all analyze clues, follow hunches, or pick up
leads as they go along. But they're awesome
decided pros of each. First, the realistic detective requires a lot more research, but there is a
wealth of knowledge one can find on the Internet, in books, or even by
interviewing a detective. The amount of
information is a means. And while you weren't
include everything, you will definitely encounter
some details that will interest your reader and add to the realism
of your story. Yet with the cliche detected, you allow yourself
the freedom of a story that isn't realistic. Meaning you can create an extraordinary situation
and can progress the story in a way that makes no sense in regards
to police procedure. Perfect sense in regards
to the story itself. It's the closest thing to
writing fantasy in the genre. As a route from the start
you are establishing a story that's more about the
pot and about the realism. This is something you
can't really do if you are realistic with the way
you write your detective. With that said, you should know that later in this course, I'll be doing lessons
in discussing the more realistic
aspects of a detective. Discussing the jog and the police Franklin
system and mole, which is information
you could use to help make your
story more realistic. This is the information you
can use if you are writing a cliche detective
and still want to bring it down
to ground level, down to earth, so to speak. With that said, huma, personal thoughts on writing a cliche and
realistic detective. When deciding on the kind of
detective I wanted to write, I thought that the
cliche detective would be the ideal choice. It allows for some
extraordinary situations and even some silliness in
regards to situations. However, the seriousness
of the realistic detected, coupled with the beat and
down to Amina had a chomp. I could not resist. Of course, that is
a cliche in itself, but one that certainly
fits better in real life than many other of the tropes that
I've considered. Not for the exercise
of this lesson. It's simply to decide the Canada detective you
want your protagonist to be. Does the freedom of a cliche
to take the appeal to you? The immersiveness of the
realistic detective. What happens if your character
isn't a license detective? Or if they simply a
teenager trying to solve a schoolyard mystery. In that case, your character
could still receive some characteristics from
these two different types. Yours can be more realistic in the way they
approached situations, or there can be
more extraordinary. Just depends on
how restricted you want to be when you are
writing your story. By adding these details that
add to the immersiveness, you'll make your
story more believable and enjoyable as
it's more immersive. However, by creating a
story that is more based in fiction with
extraordinary situations or silliness thrown
in here and the, or even some of
the cliche tropes. It would then make for
more amusing read and perhaps even a more dramatic
and enjoyable plant. With that, this lesson
has come to an end. In the next lesson, I'll be going through
some of the jargon, the lingo that is often thrown around in detective fiction. These are gonna be some of
the more popular terms, such as Alibaba to some more dated terms
such as mouthpiece. Find out what these mean in
the next lesson. For now.
4. Detective Terms and Phrases: Hello and welcome to detective
story writing course. In this lesson, we're
gonna be taking a break from more
opening the ideas of writing a detective
fiction and looking at the more niche
details that make it more immersive and realistic, we're gonna be discussing
the jargon and terms that are often used
in detective fiction. In this lesson, I'll be covering the realistic terms and phrases that are often
used by detectives, as well as the cliched terms. You never know
which one you might feel like using in your story. It also depends
on the situation. If you are creating a
motivation top story, then you might use
these more data terms. Or you might even use them
in a realistic story, but to create more amusing seen. Also before we begin, I'd like to talk about
a very important factor to consider when you're
using these terms. Jargon is great for adding detail and immersiveness
to a story, but it is also something
you don't want to overuse in your story as
you might start to lose, your reader, might
seem cool to have your characters use
these slang to use abbreviations and other jogging to make it seem a bit
more realistic and damps, but more often than not, a detective will use more common phrases to
describe something, then use the official tomb. While it is great to include these terms to add to
the immersiveness. Do not overuse them, otherwise you break immersion. Probably one of the base methods for deciding how often you use these terms is to think about it when you approach
your own career. How often do you use slang? And how often do you
use the official terms? How often do you use simple phrases and common
woods to explain something? And then use that when describing situations
and you'll novel. That way you will get a
more realistic atmosphere and you still get to use
these terms along the way. I guess another metaphor
to explain this would be to compare it
to assaulting a meal. You don't want to over salted. Where do you want
just enough to add some playful with that said, I'm going to start going
through the terms and their explanations.
So let's begin. First, suspect a
person who is under suspicion because of their
connection to a crumb, a suspect is up and
someone close to the victim be at a
friend or enemy. More commonly is a person that was present when a
crime was committed, such as being in a building, when a crime took place, Alibaba antibiotic
excuse or piece of information proving that someone was somewhere else
joining the crumb. You might have heard
this term used in practically anything
involving crime and suspects, beat and officers
assigned patrol area. You may have heard the
phrase on the beat, which refers to a
person on patrol duty. Every officer on the beat means every officer that was
out on patrol, perp. Perp is a shortened
version of perpetrator, a slang term that is commonplace amongst a uniformed officers. Now, book to erase someone. Again, you might have
heard such phrases as books or book The Pope. Next we have Canaan, which simply means
dog, as in Canaan, most cities will have a canine
division in your police, false POI, or
Person of Interest. Person with knowledge
or involvement in a criminal
investigation might be various POS and a
single investigation. It all depends on
the case itself. Now, in a conversation talking
about a hostile situation, you might have
heard the word vase based is another common phrase, referring to the
bulletproof vests. Some officers way as
protocol or patrolling a dangerous area or put on
before entering a firefight. Now you might have
versa hood, Cherry. Cherry is the red light that the patrol vehicles
have on the roof. This may also be said as
berries and cherries, a sum referring to
the multiple lots of both rate and blue chain full. A classic phrase often said of a police radio or by truckers
through their CB radios, and simply means, I understand. Another one is
Miranda or Mirandize. It is a phrase meaning
to read someone. They rats, again, a slang term referring to a particular
case and situation, but it's also a common one. And Alpha so March request
a bus when someone is injured or if there is a strong possibility of
someone about to be injured. Bag the evidence,
quite literally a balance that has been
put in a plastic bag, helps protect any fingerprints, so preventing any other clues on the evidence from
being disturbed. Contraband, property that is
often unlawful to possess. This can be anything from
drugs to illegal firearms. Detectors, often bad
contraband as it is evidence that can
contain possible clues. Another phrase is
Jane Doe or John Doe. And unidentifiable copes, a phrase used in almost every
division in a police station, either in hospitals when
they receive a copes for the mode that lacks
a name in full meant a person who has inside information
that proves useful, much like a person of interest, that an informant is generally an officer or someone
working with the police. Tempo. When someone alters
OA raises evidence, evidence that has been
tempered with can lead to the wrong person being put
under suspicion or dead end. As far as Leads go. Warrant more is a legal document that allows someone
to do something. An officer needs a warrant
to search a suspect's home, and we'll go to award opposite to apply for one by the same token or when so-and-so provided if reasonable
evidence is provided. There you have it. Those
are some phrases that are often used by police
officers today. I'm sure you might have
heard some of these already, but if there were
any that you didn't, I'm glad to have helped provide
some of that information. Of course, there are many, many others, but I don't want to read an entire
dictionary team is an a. So a lot of abbreviated
terms such as RNR, which means records
and identification. These sort of phrases
and terms are again, quite well-known
amongst police officers in the police station. And like I said,
when it comes to these more complex terms, especially abbreviations, you'll find that they
often use common phrases. It's only really the
most official situations when they use terms like these, like when they're talking with a superior officer and so on. I'm a big advocate of doing the research and putting
that research into a story. That means that you also
need to understand that some information simply
isn't necessary. You can add these
details to make a seem more realistic
or beta in some way. But by creating too much
of this information, too many details, you can
easily bog the reader down with all these
descriptions and everything. You want to give them
room to breathe, to understand and to
follow your plot. You don't want to lose
them in a wave of information that they don't
necessarily need to know. This is crammed
fiction meaning yet you are more focused on the characters and the story and the details that
matter to the story. Then additional information that is more like did you
know that anything else? Now your project in
this lesson is to do some additional research into
these phrases and terms. If there are some terms
that you are unsure, be sure to look them up, add them to a list. These are terms that you might
want to use in your story. So having them on hand
would be a great idea. Write them down on a
sheet of paper and a little notebook,
something like that. Try and see if you can
find them actually being used by police officers. And it could be in recordings. Videos on YouTube,
can be in movies or books that are
based in reality. That will help me give you a better idea of
how these terms and phrases are used and
also when they are used. So that covers terms
and phrases. Bet. Now in the next video, I'm going to be covering
the grim facts and gory details about
criminal investigation. In other words, these
other effects about how long it takes to draw well, how does a police officer
identify the gun that is being used in a crown fund
out in the next video.
5. The Grim Facts: Crime Scene Facts: Hello and welcome to a
detective story writing course. You join me on a cold gray
day where I'm gonna be talking about the
ribbon gory effects that make up to take to fiction. These often the effects that we use to describe a
crime scene and often the facts that detectives use two
piece clues together. Now a crime scenes
on Naver, pretty, be it a robbery, be it a murder scene. Perhaps there was a struggle. Perhaps the victim is this, so you can see the wounds. These all have an
array of details that can help detect a
better construct a scene. Understand what happened,
how the crime was committed, how many people were involved, what they used, and so on. The venue of this gram scene
is also a very important. It could be that the crime
scene is in a forest. There are other
factors and elements that influence the clues. Or it could be that the crime
scene is in someone's home, in an office building, or even in the criminals
very own hideout, which is decorated with all
sorts of dark paraphernalia. Venues also introduced
their own clues, their own facts that can
help add to the evidence. For example, you might have a crime that is taken
place by the ocean side. There might even be sad set. The crime scene
involved seawater, perhaps even see lamp, character of knowledge on
sea lava and how to fix the surroundings and everything could also help piece
to get an evidence. Of course, there are many places that a crown can take place, and thus, they are many details
that I could talk about. But obviously, there's not enough time to talk
about so much. I'm gonna be discussing
the general effects that can help you
understand the crime scene. And perhaps these artifacts
that you detective can use to help piece of
chromosome together as well. These are general facts that
can be used almost anyway. Let's get into it. First. When a window is broken
and losses on the inside, that means it was broken
from the outside. Very common fact and any
crime scene investigation, the more basic cramps, this is often when it's a
breaking and entering case. Now, while I'm in common, I'll lock can be picked with a special toolset
leaving no trace. It's more common though
for Locke to be forced or picked with a cheap
set of equipment, leaving scratches and damage. Next, when a bullet is the
gun leaves special markings on the casein and bullet tip is to police get hold
of these two things. The ballistics department can analyze the evidence to see if that particular gun fire
that particular bullet. Just because gunfire is the
same caliber bullet does not mean it was a gun
that did often in the old days when it
came to convicting someone with murder
and came down to simply matching the bullet with the gun that was
registered to that person. These are just some common
effects on basic crime scenes, but there's some more
trigger if there is no sign of forced
entry into building, that means the
criminal is closely related to the owner
of the building. Either they work, they live, they know somebody who does, and they let their criminal or inadvertently gave them access. The criminal could in fact be
the owner of the building. Next, if a murder victim has a spouse or significant other, they are normally the
first suspect on the list. This is because
domestic violence is a very prison thing
in society today. And now, depending into
a mold gory effect, blood splatters of larger the further they are
from the victim. This is because droplets
that are propelled of a greater distance will impact more forcefully
and spread wider. This helps detectives determine what type of weapon caused certain wounds from the pattern of blood splatters
to the distance. Sometimes it can even
tell if it's a gun, how powerful that gun is, and thus determine the
caliber of the weapon. And by determining the Kaleeba, one can easily then
determine what types of gun might've
caused the wound. Now we're getting into
the mode grizzly facts. The most squeamish of you, this might be an uncomfortable
section of the video. And if you don't plan
to include any murder, crime scenes or any use of blood or anything
like that in your story, that's fine as well. And you can easily skip this section or skip
straight to the next video. But now we'll go into
the grim effects, grizzly details that make up
murdering investigations. If homicide is an important
part of your plot, these next factor is
going to help you construct your cramps in. Blood is known to
smell like copper. Smell that is easy to notice for an experienced
homicide detective. Next, blood gets
darker of a term. If blood is still light, that means it is fresh. Of course, if it's still
wet, it is still fresh. But this is just another
way to determine how old blood is just
Trump sat alone. Next, blood can take
around an hour to draw, but this also depends on the
environment and temperature. Cooler temperate environments
will keep blood fresh, bob dry, windy
environments will not. This goes back to where your
crime scene takes place. If it takes place and let us say a desert environment than the dry with a and the humidity
will help dry the blood. However, if in a cooler
environment, that is, let's say waste, such as a Django situation
that keeps a lot longer. Next, large pool of blood requires a lot of
time to form or large wound or the
victim to still be alive as their heart
will maintain blood flow. It requires one or more of
these elements to transpire. Otherwise, you won't be encountering pools
of blood so often. In most cases, it is
often read anyway, to encounter large
pools of blood. This is also a very
important factor in constructing
your crime scene. As in most cases, if there is a small arms
used or anything like that, you want to have
buckets of blood painting the area you
will have to read, therefore more conservative and describing an environment
when it comes to goal. So as you can see from this
information of blood trail can be as helpful to detect
it as a breadcrumb trail. There are many facts
about blood that helped detectives quickly determine what state
the victim was in, how long ago cramp took place. And if they can get a
clear view of the wound, they can even then figure out what kind of weapon was used, such as a gun enough will
even a blunt instrument. And now getting even darker
with these grizzly facts, we're gonna be
discussing the effects that pertain to corpses. Now, I like to think that I'm
a pretty thick skin person. I've seen some follow-up movies. I've read some enough books. But even these facts
still give me a chill. As your imagination
can construct all sorts of situations of how these veins could transpire and then thus
create these facts. If you're creating a
more darker thriller, desk detective fiction, then perhaps these facts perfect for you when
describing these scenes. First, let's talk
about body warmth. A body is warm and not stiff. When the person has been dead
for less than three hours. This is the most time it would take full body to start
losing its temperature. And for rigor mortis to sit in. Of course, this also does
depend on the environment. If the body is warm and stiff, that means the person has been dead between three
to eight hours. If the body is cold
and not stiff. The Thompson stiff is
between 836 hours. Finally, if the body
is cold and stiff, the person has been dead
for more than 36 hours. Having talked about these
Grumman greatly effects now, it's time to their
usage in a story. Typically are at a lot
of horror and thriller. Stories from short
stories and novels. And these sort of seen
situations come up a lot. Like I said, I'm pretty thick skin when it comes
to these things. That being said, the usage, if some of these details
is very important, especially if you want
your reader to feel tints will scared or
curious about a situation. The level of grim imagery
plays a big part in this. So it's about
finding that balance between something that
is incredibly terrifying to something that is
gross but interesting. If that can be
described any better, it's not coming to my mind now, these details are great when
describing a lot of scenes. If there's anything
I learned from working with the
genres that I do, is that you don't want
to overdo it with goal and dark details. If overused, you break
the suspension of disbelief yellow to make
it seem unrealistic. Or the amount of
details too much for your reader to
take seriously. Crime scenes. I'm not
meant to be pleasant. We can all agree on that. But you can also soften the
edge of some descriptions by simply keeping them simple
instead of over the top. As for the facts
we've covered there, of course a lot more out there that you can collect
for your own research. If you want more grizzly facts, then reading thriller detective stories or watching forensic focused crime stories will give you that look
into the gory details. Of course, let's not
forget the books. There are various books on
the subject and even other mystery novels which make
greater use of these facts. Whenever you decide to get
you a collection of facts, make sure that they
are realistic, any use them sparingly. These details should
be handled the same way you handle your
jargon and phrases. It's an element of your book, but not the whole book. Unless of course it is. Which case? Ignore that last piece
of advice and write your story as fact centered
as you want it to be. Your project for
this lesson is to do some research into
the facts that pertain to the
plot of the novel. So if you have some crime
scenes are already enlightened, perhaps doing some
additional research and constructing your clues and evidence for your detective to collect and piece together. The next state with that said, This video has come training. In the next video we
will be discussing the legal side of
detective fiction. Meaning, what are they important legal facts and
procedures that a detective needs to go through to convict someone and also continue
to investigation. We've touched upon some details, but not a lot, but we'll be covering a lot more
in the next video. I'll see you then. Bye for now.
6. The Legal Side of Detective Fiction: Hello, and welcome back to detective story writing course. This lesson, we'll be discussing the legal side of
law enforcement. Now I'm not about to address several years of
law for you because you don't need to necessarily
is overall to write a book in
detective fiction. Don't know, several years and I have collected
and learned many facts along the way that
helped me rot take to fiction and that can help
you rot to take to fiction. I'll be talking
about the procedures that I'd take to needs to go through in order to
legally convict a suspect. In other words, how they
gather gather their evidence, how they questioned people, the stapes, they
take everything. Some of these you
may already know, and some of them you may not. And it is very
important to follow a legal procedure and
about gathering evidence. Because if a criminal
has committed a crime, and there's a lack
of any criminal can easily admit they
committed a crime. But unless there's evidence
in some way to convict them, the detective is stuck
in this situation. If they do go about
breaking the law, this is a great defense and
often a criminal can use, especially if the detective is unsuccessful in their
attempts to gather evidence. And of course, experienced
criminals are fully aware of these laws and often use them today advantage, for example, do in order to search the place, a detective needs a
reasonable reason to step onto the property, will go inside the building. Otherwise, they need to
then apply for a warrant, which can often be refused and is often a lengthy process. So an experienced
criminal could have multiple venues and you can simply move contraband
from one to the other. Thus, whenever they someone's searching
particular building, they might be too
late and finding any evidence that can
help convict a criminal. Of course, the legal side of any detective fiction
is often a fine line, especially when it comes to
extraordinary situations. You have those
vigilante protagonists who would take the law
into their own hands. It's often a desire for most
criminal investigators, especially those very
passionate about justice, who are hopefully a way that a criminal has
committed a crime. They must go and follow the proper legal procedure
in order to convict them. And this legal procedure
often does get in way, in which case they kind of skirt outside the
lines of what is legal in order to get the evidence they need
in order to convict someone. And then comes down through a morally gray area where you have an anti-hero
sort of character. You've got to understand that these laws are put in
place for a reason. So you don't know if you'll character could end up hurting
someone in the process. They are of course, some loopholes that can be taken advantage
of on both sides, both by the criminals and my little enforcement in
order to get through Wayne. And a lot of situations are
very time sensitive as well. And so legal proceedings can often get in the way
because they do take time. For example, if
illegal money has been made or stolen or
anything like that. And in order to get rid of them money and at the same time
still maintain that value. Often criminals were then do what is known as
money laundering, which is when they take money
that isn't as legal tender. And they turned it into an
asset which they can then turn into legal tend to lose that
illegal money in the system. For example, property
and jewelry, gold, things like that. Often the entire businesses
created false businesses. They use cleaver bookkeeping to turn false money
into real linear. It's a whole other realm of criminal investigation
that people don't often talk about, but often make for the
most interesting stories. It's not exactly a
murder investigation, but as a investigation into how corruption can also be a
fascinated detective story. I should say that
most Illegal facts based in the United
States of America, but they are often used
all over the world. So you might be able
to use these facts in your story if you haven't situated somewhere
else in the world, that is not the USA. First of all, as
you already know, a warrant is required to
search someone's home. It is also required to
search any property, such as a building belonging to the person and even a cop, a warrant can be skipped if
an opposite spot something within a view without having
entered the property. For example, they might spot illegal contraband will see
a crime being committed. Which case they will
within our legal rots, as a law enforcement officer, to intervene or to investigate. And thus can bypass the whole warrant
procedure completely. Next, a suspect,
in accordance of their rots can remain
silent until they lawyer, personal or provided is present, and then talk through
them instead. The tactic is often preferred. The suspect as officers record everything they
say and as the rods go, it can be and will be used against them
in a court of law. This is why it is often talked about as using a lawyer
as a mouthpiece. In other words, the criminal
would talk or should I say, the suspect one took was out
to use of a lawyer to help important information
or to put it in the redwoods to make sure that they hit in the best
situation possible. Now this is more a tip down
a little bit in order to keep suspects from
corroborating their stories. They are kept separate. That way if anyone who is guilty or all of
them are guilty, they stories might
contradict each other. Next and a coat, a private attorney can be high advised suspect
or public defender will be provided private
attorneys a lot more effective, but also costs a
suspect a lot of money. Private attorneys can save
a lot of innocent people, but also sit them
back financially. However, experienced
criminals don't see that as a downside
enough to use effective attorneys to
help them get out of trouble with the released,
shorten their sentence. Next, the jury must consist of randomly selected
members of the community. Biased jury members
are screened by the defendants or
prosecutors attorney. While it is uncommon, it is possible that
a criminal mock Bravo blackmail Jerry members in order to affect the
results of the trial. Yet there is an element
of risk in doing so as one jury member does not
guarantee a positive result. And if any more pressured, it could lead to one
reporting the criminal and a new Jerry being
randomly selected. Next, jails will hold a person for a short
period of time. Usually defendants
awaiting trial. Prison is both a
long-term customers. It's a small fact,
but an important one. Jails are usually looser as the defendant might
be innocent invest, not deserving of the treatment
that a criminal receives. Finally, the difference
between a lawyer and tourney. And Loya can provide
legal advice, but cannot represent someone. A coat and attorney can provide legal advice and represents
someone who caught, in other words, not
all lawyers economies, but all attorneys and lawyers. Finally, a prosecutor's
attorney can call witnesses to the
stand in a court of law. Witness can provide informational
confirm information. The same witness can
be questioned by the defendant's attorney
and vice versa. Usually an attorney will only cross-examine a
witness to counter the prosecutors points or
two question witnesses. Honesty, depending
on the relation they have to the defendant, those are some legal facts to keep in mind when
you are crafting your detective story will construct in your
courtroom scene. Of course, there are lock
more than one can use, but this covers the basics. There are more laws
regarding the use of guns and the way you
suspect is erased it. But in most detective story, in case there is more
puzzle-solving dialogue and tints, information gathering
then gun fats. Now, just because I had all these legal effects doesn't mean you
have to use them. Back in the previous lessons. These are facts and
information that you can pick and choose which
best suits his story. And again, Yoast sudden, use them so often. And now your novel
might not even consist of a courtroom scene. Perhaps the crime is
investigated and sold. And then from then on it's out of the detector of his hands. But in some cases, you never know when
you might need one. For example, a case
could start with a courtroom scene
with someone innocent is convicted and it's
up to detective to prove them innocent and so on. These are just some
important facts to keep in mind
when you detected. It's going about
gathering evidence or interviewing a suspect. And I really hope that
these facts are going to be very helpful when you are constructing more important scenes
in your novel. In the next video, we'll
be discussing the skills and detective my tab from the observations they make to the information they know pertaining to a particular case. So see you then. Bye for now.
7. The Detective Tools and Skillset: Hello and welcome to a
detective story rotting course. You're drilling me on
another cold and gray day. It's almost as if the width is trying to tell me
to do something, but more, Nora, ask
with the scopes, Let's see if we can ingest that with a slightly warmer lot. In this lesson, we're
gonna be talking about the detectives skillset. Now, I'm sure that you
have noticed when it comes to reading any
detective story, watching a detective
show or movie. The detective has certain
knowledge that they apply whenever they
doing some mundane task. Well, whenever they're
doing something crucial. In other words, they
have their habits, their techniques and methods
for getting the job done. Now these techniques and methods can vary from
Detective, Detective. Some detectors and assertion
Tom period will employ different tactics.
They often do. They own forensics because they have more
knowledge subject. Then a forensic
department does nowadays, which is one older
detective novels. It comes down to do the tick, to do their own sort of
chemical analysis of certainty. Instance. Bet. With today's standards, we have many different roles in a
police station st department, which will do these tasks. And it's up to the detective
to do other things, such as follow-up, question, people, piece things together, so on and so forth. But that doesn't mean that they don't have their own skillsets. They'll have to have
so to knowledge when it comes to interviewing people. Understanding when someone is telling them a lot,
things like that. Also picking up information
as they go along by making observations
on crime scenes and people around them. Now there is of course, an unlimited amount of waste that a detective could observe certain details and use
them to solve a case. And it will really depends
on your story as well. So I'm gonna be talking about the different skill sets
and observations that a detective can make use
when they solving a case. You don't have to use all
of these in your story, but some of these
will be useful, I imagine in some crime
scenes and they might inspire some other techniques that you want to
use in your story. Let's get into it.
The first trick that a detective employees goes back to the good old days
of mystery solving. It had only they
would when faced with a notepad with a sheet of important information
to an offset, and detective can rub
pencil shavings on the page underneath it
to reveal the indent, the paneled pain slowly and thus uncovering
important message. This is a trig countered
by the criminal BAD tearing up several pages
instead of just one. In these days when we
have the benefit of so much technology to
help us detect a moment, likely rely on them, then use their widths. That's not to say that it won't, It's just something
that's more commonplace. However, it would take
to 60 or 70 years ago, would have to use
their own knowledge to piece things together. As I've said before, we do rely more on technology today and the same applies
to any other Korea. Back then. It was up to them and their
MOND to sort things out. So often ingenious methods of
uncovering clues were used. Now sometimes these
methods would always seem be called
into question, especially by today's standards. But this information goes
along way back then. Also then helps them
to push to fund more concrete evidence
that they can use to an onto the criminal. Speaking of a pad and pencil, a detective is constantly writing down their observations, using them to record what
a person it says and does. This information
can then be taken as a statement and
made official, which can then be used
against a suspect. Should they confirm? That's what they said. Now, let's say a suspect
is having their homes searched and they are simply answering some questions
for the detective. If they have something they want to hide from the detective, they'll usually
try to get between the detective and
the hot in place. The suspect will either do this consciously,
sometimes unconsciously. For Kenai detective who can
read their nervousness, they can spot this maneuver with their own subtle movements. Thus, a detective can
inch their way closer to a hiding spot containing an
important piece of evidence. The characteristics
of the suspect being Notice can differ from
suspect to suspect. You can agood any
sort of mannerism or habit that they tend to
do whenever they nervous. For example, it could be
that they've fidgeting with the ends,
touching the face. Anything that shows
that they're lacking in confidence and thus may
have something to hide. Of course, this can also be contributed to the fact
that they might be nervous around law enforcement as
most people are nowadays. But like I said, an
experienced detective. It can detect if someone
is hiding something. At least when they
this nervous they can. Speaking of mannerisms, the mannerisms of one's
profession tends to stink. For example, a person with a military background often stands with their hands
behind their back. And manual worker
will have BP hands that either cut,
stained localised. A desk worker is likely to
have a hunch and so on. If the detective can spot a
habit or a physical mocking, they can also then deduce how this habit or mocking
came up bound. Which can go a long
way to deciding what a character was doing before
the detective entered. It's from this information
that detective can deduce what a person was doing recently or what they've been doing it for a
long period of time. Just as a sub play a big
part in how a purse laws, those who are not
cool under pressure, will try to avoid just
drain as if they do. They will usually look
uncomfortable by gesturing. Speaking of line bias tend to have more details in a story than those
telling the truth. This is because someone
telling the truth will only cover the details they
found most important, telling little what happened beyond the highlights
of an event. A lie, on the other hand, is more likely to
provide more details. They'll making it up as they go. And detective can often use this knowledge of details
against the lion, cushioning and knowledge or some details as opposed to ovens. Whereas someone
telling the truth, there will be more on Shoal
when asked for more details. Well, they will
struggle to recall. Next, we have
observations regarding a person's affinity
for certain hand. A person's dominant ten will be the hand at signs their name. When they close their hands, their dominant hands,
thumb will be on top. They will use their dominant
hand to chop vegetables. Their dominant hand
might even be thicker. They also many ways one can tell the dominant hand
of another person. And it is still important today. They are divisions in police departments which can analyze the wound and say whether it was done with a left-hand or rotten, which can then be used as
evidence should the need arise. Now you might think
that finding out the dominant hand of
a suspect is fairly commonplace and
property doesn't serve much purpose rather than just having it as common knowledge. But there's a reason it
is common knowledge. By finding this information, you could determine a
lot of things about assessment as well
as the crime scene. While this information can
also be called into question, it does go a long
way in following leads and determining
who is guilty. It's finding more
******* evidence. Depend on the suspect. When it comes to learning
more information beyond a crime scene, a detective contain or
shadow a suspect's vehicle, which might lead them to a hideout or other criminals
involved in the crime. This brings us to another
important element of detective work and
that is Tom keeping. Timekeeping is
incredibly important as this way detective
cannot record exactly when a suspect
lead to place at how long it would take
them to commit a crime before they returned. For example, if a
suspect is seen at 05:00 PM and returns at
06:15 PM the same day, then they can't have committed
a crime and always drop away as there isn't enough time for them
to get there and back. He ain't if the crime is
only a 20 minute drive away, they can still be
considered a suspect. Let's go along way in
debunking ones antibodies. Now the toolkit of
a detective can extend to the end of watch
a notepad and pencil. And detective will often wave
plain clothes to blend in as well as have a civilian
vehicle that is unlocked. They might carry a recorder
to gather information. We'll take a statement. Camera is not out of place, but they are often used
mobile private investigators, a photo or better yet, a recording goes a long way in terms of gathering evidence. Finally, there is more to your professional detective than their widths and their
on-hand toolkit. And detective police department has access to many resources, from phonorecords to
security camera footage, to a host of scientific
and forensic analysts who can gather minute evidence. They can help him Chrome
on a suspect from Hey, samples to think of prints. If you plan on rotting a detective stories surrounding
a police detective, remember that they are not
alone and have plenty of knowledgeable people they had to help them close the case. Of course, these
tools and skills and autonomy things
and detective has, it often comes down to in the most extreme cases,
following one's intuition. When a detective has a hunch, they might follow a leader
that doesn't seem to make Saints at immediately. But this is big with
subconsciously they have a good feeling about
a certain lead. Detective will have a
puzzle solving months it meaning when they
encounter a challenging case, they will have the month that encourages them to
try and solve it. They will have the month
that will search for alternative solution
and see what fits and they'll try
to make things work. Now your exercise for this
lesson is to determine exactly what knowledge
your detective hats. What tool do they have? What skills do they have in solving the mystery that
you have planned for them? And it take to clump
know everything. There's always
gonna be mistakes, there's always gonna
be shortfalls. There are gonna be others, perhaps even suspects, have more knowledge on a subject
than the detective. And thus the detective
will have to find another way in solving a case. As they simply don't
have the skills on hand to follow through
with another lead. With that said, it is a
good thing that you detect two does not have all
the pieces at hand. This simply makes them more human and thus they
have more personality. If you can't go into
specific strategy, determine what skills they
would need to know and what skills they would need to learn throughout your story. And that brings us to
the end of this lesson. In the next video,
we'll be talking about the American police
ranking system. So if you're unsure
of what ranks to his son, specific characters. If you are working with
a police detective, always the police
station in general. This is the lesson for you. I'll see you then. Bye for now.
8. Police Ranks: What Rank Should Your Character Be?: Hello, and welcome to your detective story
rotting course. In this lesson, we'll
be going through the American police
Rankin system. Now this is information that
you'll be using if you plan to write a story that's based
around a police detective, or if the police station is
a core elemental your story. When you are
creating characters, you might want to
assign the ranks to determine what place they have
and the police hierarchy. This can help you to determine who takes orders from, who, who delivers messages, and who gives instructions,
things like that. Of course, understanding who
reports to who is great. But you also need to understand what roles each rank of fills
in a police department. Now, while I'll be talking about the American police
Frankin system, most police stations will follow the same sort
of ranking system. So if you plan on city and
your story somewhere else, it'll probably have the
exact same situation as an American police
ranking system does. But if you're unsure, then obviously I recommend
doing additional research into what ranking system that police station has
in that country. If that said, let's
begin starting with the lowest ranking officer and working our way up
to Chief of Police. First we have the
police officer. The very first rank is the
common police officer. Their duties include responding
to crime, so accidents, interviewing suspects
and witnesses, writing reports and
other similar tasks. The police officer is around NCAA often assigned
two characters, passing a message in the station on patrol
and a police car. A standard police officer or petty officer is your
standard full policing. They are more of this police
officer than any other rank. Next, we had the
police detective. The detective is usually
assigned to a specific division, from narcotics to
rubbery to homicide. They are higher ranks of
detectives who act as superiors. They manage the lower
ranks are detectives. This is only the second rank
in the hierarchy system, but already we're getting
into the police detective. Typically a person can
start the policing career as a police detective if
they meet the requirements. But it's also common for
an officer to simply earn a promotion to
police detective. The next rank is
Police Sergeant. The police sergeant is much like the manager of these lower
rank police officers. The sergeant will respond to
calls from police officers, handle some more administrative
responsibilities, such as coordinating patrols. The lower ranks go to the
sergeant and the sergeant keeps the higher ranks and formed
black police detectives. Surgeons will also be assigned a specific division and
geographical location. If for Latina detective
story are normally have a sergeant that a
police detective reports to an a realistic story. There is only one
Chief of Police for each city and they
are often too busy to have detectors and petty
officers are pulled to them unless there is some
truly special reason. That is why the sergeant is such an important rank that
helps bridge the divide between opposites that on the field and those that
are more administrative. The rank above sergeant
is Police Lieutenant. Much like sergeants,
lieutenants are simply imbued with more
powers and duties. Lieutenants, depending
on the class, can assist tech tos acting
as commanding officers, Lieutenants, aw, sound specific divisions
and can be called upon to assist in high profile
cases in their division. The rank above that
is Police Captain. At captain oversees their
geographical division, ensuring that all under
them are performing tasks in accordance with
department policies. The captain managers or the administrative
responsibilities such as budget requests
and activity reports. The captain is ozone
charge of interviewing and swearing in civilian
personnel for their division. Captain is much like the mother of any
lower rank officers. They watch over the opposite and make sure they play nice. Depending on the severity
or sensitivity of a case. A caption will step in to
manage things personally. But otherwise, they are the
more to manage sergeants, lieutenants were looking
for places to trim the fat when it comes to
the budget above captain, we have police commander. The command is power in the
department is even greater, ensuring the efficiency of
the Bureau they are assigned. The command that conducts
audits on the operations, make suggestions too high and management on boosting
productivity. The command is there
to assist and improve the police service while maintaining ripple
with communities. The second law strength is
the police deputy chief. The second highest rank
for police officer. Working with the
chief of police. Deputy chief is assigned to specific Bureau from
Detective to internal phase. As the commanding officer. The DPT will perform
the duties of chief of police in the absence
of the chief of police. Which of course brings
us to the final rank, which is the chief of police. This is the highest rank and the entire police department. The chief of police is
in charge of planning and efficient administration AND operation of the police
department under the authority of the board
of Police Commissioners. So while the Chief of
Police governs over Mini of phase in a
police department, there'll also be taking orders from the board of police
commissioners who decides if they needs to
be some changes made to the policing system that
they have in place. Now that I've
simplified a lot of these ranks for your benefit. And I haven't even talked about special units such as swat yet. I hope that all I've talked
about has enlightened view on the roles of each rank and
how they all work together. Such information is important
when you are creating characters and you want them all to fit together,
to work together. Don't want to refer
to every character as other low-ranking officer
or a high-ranking officer. If you're unsure rank, they would be simplified. What duties each rank
cast as they are many edit make this lesson
clot lengthy, repetitive, and confusing now otherwise, if you want more in
depth information, you can always do
additional research on specific ranks that you tend to be working
with in your stories. If you plan to have
a police detective and you want to make reference
to the various classes. You can do more research into the three
different classes of police detective and what
duties they each hat. Of course, it doesn't hurt to condense this information down, especially since
you are going to be writing a fictional story. Meaning that GOD
going to be giving as much information as
you feel is necessary for the interests
sake of the plot and the reader also about physically recording
this information. You could have this
little cheat sheet to reference whenever
you are writing. With that said, this
lesson has come to an end. And the next lesson we'll be talking about the
traits that make it a tick to lockable and
interesting. I'll see you then. Bye for now.
9. Writing Likeable & Investing Detectives: Hello and welcome back to our detective story
writing course. In this lesson, we'll be talking about the traits
that will make a detected more likable
and investing. Now you can always
pick and choose these traits depending on
what detective you haven't. That's it. Let's get
straight into it. First, the ways in which
your detective pieces puzzles together is a great
way to show personality. Some writers prefer to
keep a detectors thoughts silent only if a revealing their conclusions when
it isn't necessary. In this way, the
reader is always invested in the
mystery more than the character as they try to solve it along with
the detective. That is not to say that you
should do it only this way. Other artists like to
have the detective show. They're ingenious
ideas and the way that the piece they're
close together as they go. They can do this through dialogue exchanged with
another character, or even by having a
detective tokens themselves. Next, the ways in which a detective interacts
with other characters. This comes down to
the personality and the various quirks
they might have. For example, you could have
a friendly detective who seemed somewhat knowledgeable
but more unassuming. And thus they might likely
lead something important, slip and watching them closely enough to see if
they make this mistake. Or you could have
a detective who's not on the inside but
rough on the outside, always showing a
cold personality, either because they
think the force and seriousness helps them
get better results. Or perhaps it is a
front to protect the mentally and emotionally when dealing with difficult cases. These are classic personality
examples that they underline a very important
element of detective fiction. Your character is going
to be interacting with people sometimes in
casual circumstances, sometimes in the
interrogation room will even at the scene of the
crime, their behavior, the way they treat good
and bad characters, needs to be considered
if you want to make them more
investing and lockable. Now there's more to
personality than just the way they interact
with other characters. There also has to be other
elements, such as mannerisms, common phrases,
ambitions, false fears, skills and so on. You have a detective
working to solve a case, but they'll still have
other problems that make it more interesting, difficult. Perhaps they were assigned a partner who is
interfering with the case where they have
responsibilities at home. Perhaps they have a personal
connection to the case, which results in them being
removed from the case, but increases their
need to work on it. The number of possible
obstacles as many, as well as the number
of possibilities for something or someone
to help them. For example, the detective
could be working in a case surrounding something they are quite knowledgeable. Or perhaps they get along
with their partners so well, that work feels easier
and more enjoyable. It all depends on the tone you want to sit with your novel. That the addition of an
extra element is always advised if you feel your
story is too straightforward. Not investing enough. When looking for ideas, a great place to source traits is to look at the
people around you. What are they? Mannerisms,
their personality traits that make them so interesting. It could be used to make
your character interesting. If you get the trans as well to interview a real detective, why not ask them how they
approach a case OSC, their partner, how they approach the case for a
better perspective. You can obviously
source ideas from fiction as well be at
characters and books, movies or TV shows. We'll be discussing
more fictional examples in the next lesson. So stay tuned for that. Finally, never
underestimate the power of a good sense of humor. If you can write
an amusing scene to break the tantrum or Latin, what feels like a dark story. And take advantage
of that skill. The detective doesn't
have to be a comedian. Everyone says something
funny once in a while. So should your detective, or at least someone around them, their jokes are the
reactions could help to show a more human side
of their personality. If you can't tell a joke, then perhaps construct
an amusing scene with a detective is clumsy or
witnesses something funny. If you have an idea of what
to write but struggle, don't fret about it. Take your time. Make it casual by not putting
all your focus on it. That way it will
read well and have a great chance of
working as a seam. I hope this lesson has
helped you to see that great characters have
their good traits and they are bad traits as well. It is often the case though
in most functionalities, to make use of what is known
as a blank main character. Meaning that the main
character is completely mundane and they
simply fulfilling the role that they have
to play in the story. It's kind of like creating a hollow shell for the reader
to place themselves in. That way they can
experience and feel the emotions of the main
character but better. But at the same time, what does, does great as a less
likable main character? You will find that
the reader will then have more interest in the side characters rather
than the main character. Now this is not a bad practice. If this is something
that you have in mind, then by all means go for it. But a lot of great characters in any fiction will stand
out, be remembered. And BSO on the high tier list of characters that are
liked and that story, I even have an entire
course dedicated to making your main character
more interesting, to making them better
for your story. You can check out my
profile if you wish to see that they have it. This is probably one of the lost very serious lessons in course. As in the next lesson, we'll be taking a
breather to discuss some popular examples in fiction that you can
take inspiration from, from detectors in the books to the detectives
in the theaters. I'll see you then. Bye for now.
10. Great Detectives To Be Inspired By: Hello, and welcome back to
a detective story course. In this lesson, we're simply going to take
a step back from the serious content and look at some great inspirations
for detective stories. Now there are many
inspirations to choose from. Inspirations you
can find in books, TV shows, and movies. Sometimes these crossover. And I'm pretty sure it all
depends on which version of these characters you wish
to take inspiration from. With that said, I'm going
to be going through the most popular fictional
examples of detectives. First, let's talk about the most popular
detectives in literature, starting with the
classic Sherlock Holmes. Originally a creation of
Sir Arthur Conan Doyle. Sherlock Holmes had
short stories which appeared in magazines,
then Complete Novels. The character was a hit in
its Tom and still is today. From the movies to the series, to the paradise which
have been created. Of course, there are some
more modern takes on Sherlock Holmes as being
seen in movies and TV shows, which have done quite well too. And although I haven't familiarize myself
with these TV shows, I have heard that they are very popular and great inspirations to take when it comes to Sherlock Holmes and
the personality of a highly intelligent but
highly strung detective. Sherlock Holmes presented an incredibly
intelligent detective, man of science, but
also a man with a drug problem and an
ego to match his height. These are the faults that sort of balance out these
positive traits. And also give you a more
realistic perspective on a full human to human. And sherlock Holmes is
not without its problems. The second most
famous detective. Well, this is not a list
of the most famous, but the second in this list is her keopireul creation
of Agatha Christie. Tokyo borrow mysteries
were mess hit. Although they started very
early in the 20th century. They really took off
in the 60s and 70s. Like Sherlock Holmes,
these stories were turned into movies and even TV series, which explains why they became such a big thing in the
sixties and seventies. Borrow, however, remains a
detective outcome to this day, as does his mustache. Now I've already mentioned Sam Spade and knees now
cliche traits from the novel, The Maltese Falcon,
Dashiell Hammett. Like all these
previous examples, The Maltese Falcon
has a plethora of techniques to study
when it comes to crafting and investing mystery. Not to mention the
Sam Spade radio shows which you can
find on YouTube if you wish to listen to
some adventures that families listened to in the
late 40s and early 50s. Another classic from Agatha
Christie is Ms. Model. Like Agatha Christie detectives. Before her, Ms. Mapo is more methodical and
brilliant as opposed to a determined
detective who's ready to get their hands dirty
to solve a mystery. Yet considering that Ms.
Model is a little old lady, the chances of that
happening ont great. Still this is a character with the mind that is
worth looking into. Next, we have **** Tracy. Personally. I'm not too familiar
with **** Tracy. I'm away that he started out as a comic book character that
got cereal films in the 70s. And other than that, I know that he is
big in the realm of detective characters and
might be worth looking into. If you're interested in comic book perspective
on a detective, I'm told her Classic
and the comic industry. Now, if your target audience
is younger than there is a host of mystery fiction
that might interest you. You have Nancy Drew, the famous file, the secret
seven, The Hardy Boys. One of these are
still big today, being simple and
yet well-written mysteries that anyone can enjoy. Not to mention, these are
books that show you don't need to have a killer to
make a mystery interesting. Now for the lost on this
list of inspirations, I've saved the base velocity at least the best in my opinion. Yes, I am biased, but this is my course. So I present to you Colombo. Colombo started earlier
than most think, but these series only
became a thing when peta folk took up the
role in the late sixties. It was the start
of a movie series that went on for four decades. These are reverse mysteries
where you are presented with a killer and how they committed the crime right at the
start of the show. But the real joy of the mystery was watching Colombo piece it all together and how and
the suspect until yet, all you needed to convict them. It's a great show that I'm sure many of you are familiar with. If you're not, I can
highly recommend it. There you have it. Some popular examples of detectors that you
can look into in your own free time
if you haven't already familiarized yourself
with these detectives. Now, as I said earlier, a lot of these have
made they break into the film and TV industry. Some of them have had
several iterations over the years or decades. Even with that in mind, there are many different
characteristics that have been. What's the word transposed onto these characters
thanks to the actors. So if you want to focus
your inspiration on a particular actors rendition of the cacti, you can do so. As I said before, finding these
habits, mannerisms, and phrases that often associated with these characters can also be associated
with your own. In other words, if you'd
like a character's gestures, you can use that. If you'd like the
way they speak, you can use that. You can create a Frankenstein of all ideas and thus make it your own, therefore
something unique. Now your detective
doesn't have to be such an icon of a character and I don't need to stand out. They didn't need all this at an additional emphasis
on the personality. All that they really need to be as a character
plays the role, they just solve a mystery. And that's really what
this course is about, is writing a story with a character whose intent on
PC and a puzzle together. With that, uh, Monday
or other places that you can take
inspiration from. You can go to places like Pinterest and look
up artworks created by many talented people are the pictures that can
give you inspiration, not only on your protagonist, but you're sad characters, the places where you will
be taking place and so on. Also, you can look into
music, for example, I've always encouraged
my readers when they are lacking the mood to rot, to create it by looking at
these images and inspirations, but also listening
to the music they feel would be playing
in these scenarios. So for many would probably be some sort of smokey jazz music, something that really
adds to that sort of nor ambulance to others. It might just simply be music that is played
during the tongue. It really gives that feeling
of a detective at work. And I really do hope
that you also look into these inspirations if you're not familiar with them as they are. Some great examples, at least the ones that
I'm familiar with, I believe are great
examples of detectives. And that brings us to
the end of this lesson. In the next video, we'll be talking about the styles
that you can watch, detective stories in the
length of the novels, the important details
that perspective. So you don't want to miss
it. I'll see you then. Bye for now.
11. Basic Elements of Detective Fiction: Hello and welcome back to
detective story writing course. In this lesson, we're gonna be talking about the
important details and elements of a detective story
that you're unsure about. Especially if you're
new to writing. You might have no clue of how long your detective
stories should be, what perspective to writing
or even what style. I'm going to be going
through all these details from beginning to
end so you can get a better idea of how to start and go about writing
your detective novel. However, when it comes to a creative project such as this, it always comes down
to what you prefer, the information that
I'll be talking about to present to you all the
directions you can go. And you'll always find yourself leaning towards one
rather than the other. All of these have
their pros and cons, but some of them will
sound better to you. And those are the
ones that I would recommend you tank
with that said, be sure to take this lesson
with a pinch of salt. You are still the one in charge. You're going to write the
way that you wanted to write and do the things that you
want to do with you. A story. That's it. I'm still gonna be talking about the pros and cons
of these elements. So let's get into it. Every writer has their own style and we're gonna be talking
about that first of all. As long as you write
like he naturally would, your instincts will ensure
that your style is your own. Yet if you want to have a
certain field to your book, then creating a writing
structure will help you establish a sort of style. You can keep your dialogues
brief or make them link to. You could have a complex story or fairly straightforward one. My recommendation, try
to write naturally. For many neuritis, it is easy to look at
other writers and try to emulate their
style with the story. Yet most will end up forcing
a rotting in doing so. And it shows in the
quality of the writing. If you don't mind the extra
time and effort to rot away that isn't your own
style then by all means. But don't downplay the
significance of your own style. It could be the thing that
makes your story great. Now, when it comes to length, I've always talked
about lengthen. It comes to certain genres. And I will admit there
are some differences when it comes to
detective stories. It all comes down to deciding, once you feel comfortable
with writing, short stories can range
from anything as low as 500 words to 49 thousand words. Novels are 50 thousand words
and up for beginner writers or recommend pushing to write a novel over 50 thousand words. 65 thousand to 80 thousand words being a standardized by a bomb. This is a word count that
is very popular today. It's long enough to create an interesting story with
its own twists and turns. But also it's short enough to cater to most readers nowadays. Of course, by today's standards, 65 thousand words is not the
lowest limit you can go. You can go shorter than that
and you will still do well. Something that really
makes for a quick weekend read or an audio book is ideal. Now perspective, there is the personal perspective where narrated talks about what
happens in the story. It could be a nobody Narrator. It could be a
character in a novel retelling the events
as they saw it. First-person perspective is when the story is told
from the perspective of someone in the book, thus giving you insight into their thoughts but not others. The third-person
perspective helps you to set the
ambiance of a novel, as well as keep the
thoughts and feelings. Have some characters hidden unless they express
our voice them. The person perspective just
as easily can give the reader a look into the thoughts and feelings
of other characters. But that depends on how intrusive you want
to be as a narrator. In which case it might
be better to go with first-person
perspective and choose the main character
who you feel gives an excellent perspective
on the story. Third person works well
in this sub genre. As it can give the reader
layout of the crime scenes, it can move characters
around better to really set the scene as well. Now, first-person perspective
is a lot more immersive as you experienced each scene
in that character's shoes. There may be the only
character who you really have insight
into how they feel. But that also helps the reader building attachment
to the character, which is why it is often the main character that is in the first-person
perspective. Because you want to
feel attached to the main character in the story. The protagonist. First-person
perspective works well in mystery novels because it allows you to keep
some important details are hidden from the reader, either by keeping it out
of SO2 earshot toolbar, distracting the main
character's perspective with a red herring. When it comes to perspective, found that third person works
well with the latter story. And first-person works
better with a darker story. The first-person things
feel more personal, so grim scenes will hit
harder as you convey the emotion through such a
close perspective better. Yet in the third person, it's easy to detach as you aren't in the main
character's shoes. Of course, that doesn't
mean you can't write a hard hitting seen
in third person. But first-person will
always feel a lot more personal because it is. Finally, let's talk about how descriptive you can be
in your detective story. Mystery stories are
all about details. You can introduce a
clue in many forms. From the physical evidence a detective collects the smells, they smell the conversations
they over here. If you wanted to, you could have lots of
important details for swamping the reader of
paragraphs of information. That tactic is not recommended
when it comes to details, treat detective stories as
you would any other novel. Sure, you can discuss matters
of importance in detail, but don't linger on describing the mundane and unnecessary. Either to just pad
your story or to confuse your reader with as
many details as possible. This is not recommended by going into the unimportant
or unnecessary, you risk losing your reader. The reader ones to
stay invested as it is the only way that demand will work along with the detectives. The best way to make it difficult
for the reader to solve a mystery is to keep details
seemingly unconnected. Yes, a red herring
here and there to keep the reader guessing and
the detective busy. But otherwise it's simply about making it difficult
to connect the dots. Then there you have
it. The basics of writing a detective story. This is some information
that you can use when constructing the
structure of your book, length and the style. Bet with that, instead, I'm not going to be taken
a step back from being an instructor in this course to talk into your
personally as a writer. The next video I'm
going to be giving you my personal tips on
writing detective stories. And feel free if you are experienced in this
sub-genre to share your own. In the comments below, we want to build a
community of writers. So if you wanted to do more
than just share your writing, you can do so in the comments below by talking
about methods that you've found effective
and writing stories. With that, I'll see
you in the next video. Bye for now.
12. My Writing Advice for Writing Detective Stories: Hello writers and welcome back to a detective story course. In this lesson, I'm going to be talking to you as
a fellow writer, discussing my personal tips, erotic and detective story. And this is a two-way
discussion, not a lecture. Meaning if you have
any information you wish to share with other
students who were with me, you can do so in comments below, I'm an active instructor, which means I'll
be there to answer them as soon as I see them. With that said, let me
talk about story writing. I have written hundreds
of short stories, more website, I've
written novels. I understand certain
genres better than others, but I've certainly
pushed to stick with my guns and Rod
want to know based. That's why I've never
written any novels in some genres are taught
courses and some genres. As I'm just not
familiar with them. I struggled to convey certain emotions
that those genres are popular for,
things like that. That said, from my experience and on my time
writing and teaching, I have learned a lot from both writing and from
looking with my students. There's always gonna
be a chance to learn something new when
it comes to writing. Which is why I watch
other artists courses, which is why I read
at the blogs or watch any YouTube videos and learn more from other
experienced rotis, as well as my own students
who are also pick up on their own
techniques and methods. In other words, they
create styles which are unfamiliar to me sometimes. And also methods which are found in genius for
telling a story. That said, let me
not bore you with a dash of other writers
and the students, I have my community. But tell you some
personal tips I have for writing this sub-genre. Start with my first step, which is don't forget
your main character. It's easy to get sidetracked by the side characters or
even with complex plot. If you put more focus on
the core of your novel, then it's very easy to let
some parts of the story down. And the worst one to neglect
is your main character. I want to first started writing. I got invested in parts must story that I felt
more interested in. During the writing stage, my interests changed
with the days. Some parts appealed to
me more than others. When I took the time to read
through what I had written, I noticed that my characters have faded into the background. The main character, especially
the main character for me, became an uninteresting
tool that simply progress the story rather than a character connected
with or cared about. Unfortunately, it's
a common mistake that I've seen in
literature today to have characters such as this. Often they are made blend
intentionally that we read this can subconsciously
place themselves into the main character's shoes, as I've said before. But my first tip is to watch
out for this and corrected a detective and a
detective story should be just as
important as the mystery. Make them interesting,
make them have some quality that says they are the main character
for a reason. And not just some empty
a role that was filled with whatever name and
personality that can be found. That said, my next step
is to set limits on the complexity of administering pretty self-explanatory tip. You don't want to
over-complicate the story with so many twists and turns that the readers let
spinning in the wind. After all, most crumbs on so
complex in their execution, that leaves a lot
of room for error. Third tip is subtlety is key whenever I'm
constructing dialogue. First ask myself if I wanted
to be subtle or dramatic. Whenever I need to be dramatic, I can go all out with
the emotion from shouting to cursing too
harsh back and forth, that might lead to
violent confrontation. Yet, when I need to be subtle, I'll make sure the characters
on the right frame of mind. Other, they approached the
discussion intelligently, listening for clues
or being diplomatic. Perhaps the honest
situation that doesn't allow them to speak their minds. So they need to choose
their words carefully. Thus, I choose my
words carefully. Now my next tip is to use inspiration to make
something unique. There are many ideas
already printed, especially when it
comes to mystery. There's so many twists and turns that have
been done before. Clever tricks and a
genius plots that have been devised and
turned into stories. It would be ridiculous to assume that within the scope
of the law that there has been a plot or conspiracy that hasn't
already been done. But that said, there's still a little
uniqueness with each and every mystery you can find in these
detective fictions. An author often takes
inspiration from other writers when they are
struggling to find ideas. Modelling a similar twist
or mystery for this story. How they make it unique is
by altering some details, perhaps changing the outcome
or even the suspect, by adding their own
fled to mystery. That doesn't
necessarily make it all more special in the
sense of complexity, perhaps difference
in their elements, but certainly makes it unique. There could be new elements, an array of characters
that could've have some involvement
in the story. A mystery can turn
out to be bigger than expected or smaller
than expected. Any idea can be redone in such a way that it is
unique to the author. With that said, if you're
ever struggling with an idea, I recommend turning
to a book author. We're examining
some plot points. Now the last step I have
isn't really a tip, but more like some
friendly advice. It's to simply pace yourself. As I've talked about in
larger genre courses. Writing a novel is a
marathon, not a sprint. You don't want to burn out
after working so hard, but you also don't want
to take so long that you lose interest about
pacing yourself. You keep yourself working, but also you keep your
enthusiasm constant. And there you have my tips for
writing a detective story. Your project for this
course is simply to submit a scene
from new story. It can be a rough first draft, anything that really captures
your story, you can submit. It'll be reviewed
if you wish it to. You can just simply
add a comment saying can you please have a look at this or any suggestions
or anything like that? I'm an active instructors
have seen before, so I'd be more than happy to help if you've hit a dead end. Or if you simply want to have. Another perspective
on your style. As I've said in other
courses and even articles, you can always look
to your friends and family members to get a stick and perspective on your story. Or you can turn to me as I'm always happy to read
and review writing. And with that, this
course has come training in the next video, I'll conclude to what you have learned and what comes next. So I'll see you
then. Bye for now.
13. Conclusion to Writing Detective Fiction for Beginners: Hello, congratulations,
you've taken the very first step in writing
a first detective story. Watching this course
from beginning to end as more than prepared you to
start writing your novel. Before I talk about
what comes next, I want to give one
more piece of advice, one writer to another. When you start writing, focus on moving forward and writing as much as you
feel is necessary. Don't linger on all the
chapters to edit or rewrite your story as it could break up your writing flow and make
it difficult to continue. Save all that work for
once you've finished your first draft
and then come back to correct mistakes,
what to change? Important plot
points if necessary. With that said, Where
do you go from here? Well, the first thing
I recommend is to finish your preparations
for your novel. This can be anything
from writing your plot structure to writing your chapter summaries
a server course on planning and novel, which you can find
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when I post a new course, I have an array of
courses that might interest you and I encourage
you to check them out. Doing so not only helps me, but hopefully it helps you as well on your writing journey. Speaking of help, if you ever hit a dead end
variety new novel, Be sure to leave a question
in the discussions below. I'm always happy to help in
any way I can and perhaps get you past that little
writer's block and to finishing your story. If you want a more private
tutor ship on your writing, you can always join
my writer's workshop. You can find that at the top of my website, the
paint sleuth.com. That way you can show
your work with me and more privately and I can help give you more hands-on advice when it comes to
tackling these problems. Now I do hope you enjoyed
this course and as always, good day, could not. And happy writing.