Fanny Richard

Male mit Werten: Von Skizze über Graustufen zu Farben (Clip Studio Paint)

Hello, Thanks a lot for your submission, I'm very pleased to see your work and I'm happy if my course has helped you!! I will try to keep my feedback relevant to the course, so we can focus on only a few things at a time: First of all, you did a very good job! I can see you had a good understanding of the course, and followed the steps carefully. Now here is what you can improve: - Be careful to apply the textures following the direction / perspective of the element that you're trying to cover (even when your overall perspective is not on point. Here, your concrete texture is very distorted in some places compared to the direction of the wall. For textures rather abstract like concrete you can be a little bit more loose with your placement compared to pavement for instance, but it should still look believable. - For this particular drawing I think that using only two lighting values instead of three on your character would have improved the readability of your image. Or maybe just use the darker value with more moderation (like just in some places that wouldn't read too well without it, like at the intersection between the chin and the neck). But, for example, the extra cast shadows on the face or under the shirt are a little bit confusing. But that's it, otherwise you did a very good job! I hope my feedback will help you, and don't hesitate if you have more questions.

semi new to art but this was very helpful for a better understanding. Any feedback is always nice! (PS: I wanted to focus on the color side of things so perspective and line art are things I just did quickly and thus aren't great)<img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/b1f8fe1930317d9cef1248fcff0d0e2b/b89b8342.jpg 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/b1f8fe1930317d9cef1248fcff0d0e2b/b89b8342.jpg 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/b1f8fe1930317d9cef1248fcff0d0e2b/b89b8342.jpg" loading="lazy" alt="practise - image 1 - student project"><img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/b1f8fe1930317d9cef1248fcff0d0e2b/9fb60ad4.jpg 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/b1f8fe1930317d9cef1248fcff0d0e2b/9fb60ad4.jpg 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/b1f8fe1930317d9cef1248fcff0d0e2b/9fb60ad4.jpg" loading="lazy" alt="practise - image 2 - student project">

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