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Geschichten erzählen mit Comics 3: Eine banale Gesprächsszene

Haha. This is relatable! You got the bubbles flowing in a clear order. I read it in the order you intended and it makes sense! Well done! Yes it takes more concentration to draw the same thing consistently. That's why many people simply do a copy paste digitally. But looking at these, these look like effort has been put in and it feels more warm. And the pencil erase marks add to the charm, really! Usually when the characters have unique features like that hairdo or glasses, they're often still recogniseable even if they're not completely consistent. And the tonal values for the characters were done well.  Only one thing to note. Avoid making your characters stand on the bottom panel line as it isn't the floor but the bottom of the "camera" crop. So it's better to move them up and draw a line for the real floor.  But as it is, this is really good. Hope you had fun with this, and keep writing/drawing more comics!

Thanks for your comment and critic. I appreciate it. I totally wasn't aware of the camera crop floor bottom thing so thanks for pointing it out. I've so much to learn.

You did a good job with that consistency, Jane. 🙂

This is so sweet! (also, I like your mark making skills!)

I found it quite hard to draw the same thing and keep it consistent. Also, I wished I had sharpened my pencil before I did the speeches, lol.
<img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/d8cf7120.jpg 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/d8cf7120.jpg 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/d8cf7120.jpg" loading="lazy" alt="What's for dinner conversation - image 1 - student project">

What's for dinner conversation

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