I really liked the synth part and the chorus, I expanded it futher to a fulll song to try understand what the person was going through and used what I learnt here as a metaphor. I lay my vocals and tried to just grrr the melody (sorry im south african our vocab yoh!)

I really wanted to give it my own spin and try and stay true. I hope you like it. Thank you for going through the basics with me would love your feedback. I had been playing around with splice samples and using native instruments so i worked on this for a couple of weeks just exploring. It was cool to take my music background and finally realise a dream, I have been running away from for so long would love your feedback on how to improve 

worked on logics but used band lab for mastering, I found loops and samples on splice using by Arturia Midi to compose