Nicole Mae

Außergewöhnliche Gedichte: Schreibe Poesie, die dich von der Masse abhebt

This is an incredibly visceral poem. I love the image of the speaker crawling out of their skin and taking a new shape, like a chamaeleon. Very powerful and affecting.

Yes! Amazing and I feel that on so many levels

Beautiful! You have a perfect blend of emotions and visuals in this piece. I like this a lot!I think there's room to play around with your formatting! The words themselves are great, so I would add some creativity in the structure of it. Break up the sentences a little more and isolate some phrases. I think that would elevate your piece to the next level.Thanks for submitting! This was a pleasure to read.

About being a people pleaser and compromising your authentic self for the sake of others&nbsp;
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