Re-write it to make it more persuasive
Original Line of Copy: "Upgrade Your Phone Today."
Revised for More Persuasion: "Transform Your Life with the Ultimate Phone Upgrade – Get Yours Now!"
Original Line of Copy on Product Page: "Our Coffee Maker Brews a Perfect Cup."
Revised for More Persuasion on the Product Page: "Experience the Perfection of Every Sip with Our Exceptional Coffee Maker – Order Yours Today!"