Project: Brainstorm your story
PARAGRAPH:
Russel Hemsley and his friends, Tasha and Bailey, decide to prove that the old church is not haunted. In their journey to debunk the rumours, they find a body; which vanishes before anyone else can see it. When no one believes them, Russell and his friends decide to investigate for themselves. Through the investigation of this body and several missing persons cases, they discover secrets about wicked conspiracies, dark magic, and how it’s all connected to Russell’s parents.
PLOT SENTENCE:
Russel and his friends find a body and when no one believes them, they start their own investigation.
STORY SENTENCE:
Russell must overcome his disbelief that his father is a bad person in order to save his friends
NEW PARAGRAPH:
While attempting to disprove a haunting, Russell and his friends discover a body. When the body disappears, leaving them with no proof, they decide to investigate it themselves. Russell and his friends unveil secrets that change their reality and paint his father’s hands with the crimes. When his father takes one of Russell’s friends as his next victim, Russell must overcome his disbelief that his father is the culprit in order to save his friend.