My own song - Starstuck - feedback appretiated!
Structure: Verse refrain
verse 1
darling please, don't fall asleep
scared we will fall in way too deep
for the waters shallow and your loves too steep
starstuck in 2-0-2-3
verse 2
Demolition at high speeds
Fire engines as horns beep
should've looked both ways fore' I crossed your street
starstuck in 2-0-2-3
verse 3
Coffee stains on your white tees
Cigarette stains on my teeth
Adventure time, fin and jake your my marceline
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