Ryan Engley

Dedizierte Landing-Pages erstellen: So erzielst du ein besseres ROI aus deinen Marketingausgaben

Most of the picture  got cut off. I added the link to the Landing Page - <a href="https://mailchi.mp/607138c2960f/kadencebox" rel="nofollow" target="_blank">Kadence Box Landing Page</a>

Hi Damaris - thanks for being one of the first to share your project! 

Attached to the course is a great worksheet which helps you plan out your main headline, subhead, features/benefits, social proof and call to action. These are the landing page fundamentals that will help you keep, engage and ultimately convert visitors on your landing page. I highly recommend filling it out as this gives you a great place to start with your page.

My next piece of advice is to complete a fast 5 second test with people around you. Show them your page for 5 seconds, hide it, then ask them to tell you what your page is about, and what value they get from it. If they can't tell you, this can help you hone in on your problem.

In my case, when I see your page I see "Kadence Box" "Your style in perfect rhythm" and "December 2018" as the key points. But with just those three, I cannot clearly identify what your page is about and what benefit I'd get from it.

So I'd recommend start with your copy using the worksheet attached to your course, test that copy with some folks to see if they can then explain your page's value, then update your page with that copy.

Hope that helps and be sure to follow up with any other questions

I created a landing page that I would love feedback on. I don't know if you can see the picture fully or not. If not let me know.
Thanks!
Damaris
URL to landing page - https://mailchi.mp/607138c2960f/kadencebox

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