Gesa Pickbrenner

Blender in die Tiefe: Schmuckdesign Grundlagen in 3D

Hey Oliver, great job. Yes, on the left, the focus is very clear, and on the right, the crop is much better - however, now the crystals compete a bit with the ring. Maybe tone them down slightly (or use another hue completely), so that the ring is the most saturated. And perhaps remove the crystal directly to the right of the ring (and perhaps move the one that is behind the ring slightly to the right so they don't visually touch), to just keep the main character clear. I like it! Overall, the right one seems super interesting to look at! Great succession of the project. Thanks a lot for your kind review, I am thrilled to experience you taking such massive action.  Kind regards, Gesa

Hi Oliver, amazing work once more. You really outdid yourself here. I'm so proud to see work like yours! Some things come to mind - it might be nicer to have a background in a slightly different color than the ring. Or a higher contrast, a bit darker perhaps - otherwise the ring shape gets lost a little within the broader context. I also think the image could be cropped just a little to keep the focus more on the ring, otherwise there's a lot of grey rocks :) Also, perhaps just a little bit more light onto the lower left part of the ring and stones (they are slightly darker than some parts of the bg) - I think if the ring popped more visually this image would be even better! As a variation, if you want to keep as much from the background as you do here, it might be nice to have a little bit of variation in there, e.g. crystals growing out of some places. Or - two more ring models with different colors sitting on the rocks - could be another idea...just brainstorming here. But for a single focus presentation, it might be best to just lower the bg contrast a bit more to have the ring be the star of the show. Lovely work all in all, absolutely stunning. Keep going and you will be going places with your work.Thanks a lot for sharing once more.  Just like last time - if you feel the class deserves a review, would be greatly appreciated as well. All the bestGesa

<img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/1f7e279b917ff87052f87317cddf2fbe/650c755d.png 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/1f7e279b917ff87052f87317cddf2fbe/650c755d.png 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/1f7e279b917ff87052f87317cddf2fbe/650c755d.png" loading="lazy" alt="Jewelry Ring - image 1 - student project"><img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/1f7e279b917ff87052f87317cddf2fbe/9439ee64.png 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/1f7e279b917ff87052f87317cddf2fbe/9439ee64.png 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/1f7e279b917ff87052f87317cddf2fbe/9439ee64.png" loading="lazy" alt="Jewelry Ring - image 2 - student project">Something like that ?

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