Edi Liang

Storytelling-Masterclass für Videokünstler: Wie Sie Zuschauer dazu bringen können, sich zu kümmern

Hey! Nice! thank you for your submission. One thing, the hook doens't need to be long, usually the build is the longest part, the longer, the more satisfying the result is. But the hook is short, I would say starting from the second half would be better :)

For this project, I used a personal experience that happened to me when I started studying to become a Community Manager
 
<img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/1dcea4a2.jpg 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/1dcea4a2.jpg 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/1dcea4a2.jpg" loading="lazy" alt="I GOT A JOB DOING SOMETHING I DIDN’T KNOW HOW TO DO - image 1 - student project">

I GOT A JOB DOING SOMETHING I DIDN’T KNOW HOW TO DO

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