Jon Brommet

Einführung in das Verpackungsdesign: Vom Konzept bis zum Druck mit Adobe Illustrator

Thanks for sharing Tazreen! Please do review the class if you haven't already too. I'd really appreciate it.Here are some notes. Don't feel you have to do any of this, they are just my observations. I'll be a bit more detailed since you're looking to go into this field!1. I'd add a period at the end of "Store in a cool..." sentence sine it is a sentence with commas etc.2. This is less important, but you have a variety of different font cases happening. Some sections are fully uppercase "SPICING THINGS UP..." some are mixed "Hot Mama, Hot Sauce, Proudly Made, etc." and some are all lowercase "bloody mary, slow - simmered, etc." So I'd maybe pick 1 or 2 of those styles and make the rest consistent.3. I think the main image where the lady is eating the pepper looks a bit weird like her hair is holding the pepper. I'd just separate them somehow.4. Font sizing. Again, pick maybe 3 sizes and try and keep all the text (excluding Nutrition Facts and Barcode) at one of those 3 sizes just for consistency.5. The ingredients list font might be a bit big compared to other parts.6. Not sure what the lines beside "Proudly" are for.So those are some things to consider refining. But there are a lot of positives. I like the name, concept, colour scheme, font choices, illustration and more. I like the different lady faces for the heat scale too lol.Great work and thanks again for taking the class!

I just left a review, thank you so much!

I definitely had some issues with font sizing and I agree with most of your critiques. Will keep this in mind going forward for sure. Thanks again!!

Thanks for the class! I'll be taking packaging design at uni so this was a nice warm-up! I went with a retro western style and wanted to experiment with some textures and fonts.
 
<img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/1395e0ec78f4a9923e3c4c350045723d/6017f1e1.png 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/1395e0ec78f4a9923e3c4c350045723d/6017f1e1.png 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/1395e0ec78f4a9923e3c4c350045723d/6017f1e1.png" loading="lazy" alt="Hot Mama Hot Sauce - image 1 - student project">

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