Siobhan Twomey

Lerne Animation! Klassische 2D-Animation für Anfänger

Wow! Great work Marilyn!! Thank you for posting, so exciting to see this. Your jump is awesome! I know frame 4 is missing arms, it catches my eye just a little, but the motion and the flow of the rest of the animation is really good. I think the timing is spot on... if you imagine him walking up and jumping over and continuing on, you've done really well to get a nice, believable action. I love your anticipation pose, and over-shoot and settle. All works to make smooth animation. Also really like the bouncing ball! This is so nice to see, it's got that wonderful quality that can ONLY come from hand drawn animation - possibly the first section needs a tiny bit of tweaking, i feel it comes in a bit slow, and maybe the first stretch pose is a frame or two too soon?? I'm not sure, what do you think? It's just a suggestion to look at it. Overall, both these projects show a real competence and affinity for animation, very exciting to see and I hope you take this further! thanks again, this will surely inspire other students to post their work :) Siobhan.

Thank you for your feedback! Definitely will apply it to my next projects. I'm just really happy that I got pass the bouncing ball. Only would animate that maybe twice a year for the past 3 years or so and wouldn't go beyond that out of fear, but your class and the steps helped a lot!

Oh, that is great to hear!! Thank you so much. You can DEFINITELY move on from the bouncing ball! :) Yay! Great work Marilyn. i think you have a really good affinity for animation, timing and spacing so am excited to see where this takes you. Good luck going forward and let me know if you have any other questions.

Here are my versions of the two projects. Just realized that in my character jumping animation, the 4th frame is missing arms ... oh well. Both are not perfect but they are finished within my own deadline. Happy to push through the class and projects because I almost didn&rsquo;t. Now, I&rsquo;m a little less afraid of traditional animation.
<img src="https://static.skillshare.com/cdn-cgi/image/quality=80,width=1000,format=auto/uploads/project/fe7c9bc2b7c24c5812e1f98bcd253a45/36fe78be" alt="Bouncing Ball &amp; Character Jumping - image 1 - student project" srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/cdn-cgi/image/quality=80,width=600,format=auto/uploads/project/fe7c9bc2b7c24c5812e1f98bcd253a45/36fe78be 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/cdn-cgi/image/quality=80,width=1000,format=auto/uploads/project/fe7c9bc2b7c24c5812e1f98bcd253a45/36fe78be 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" loading="lazy">
Done in Rough Animator on iPad Air 1 w/ Wacom Intous Creative Stylus.
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<img src="https://static.skillshare.com/cdn-cgi/image/quality=80,width=1000,format=auto/uploads/project/fe7c9bc2b7c24c5812e1f98bcd253a45/a6ec8037" alt="Bouncing Ball &amp; Character Jumping - image 2 - student project" srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/cdn-cgi/image/quality=80,width=600,format=auto/uploads/project/fe7c9bc2b7c24c5812e1f98bcd253a45/a6ec8037 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/cdn-cgi/image/quality=80,width=1000,format=auto/uploads/project/fe7c9bc2b7c24c5812e1f98bcd253a45/a6ec8037 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" loading="lazy">
&nbsp;Done in Adobe Animate CC.
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Hope to see other students&rsquo; projects soon!

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