Cara Ord

So zeichnest du ein Gesicht

Hello Agostino,Great job on adding to this project. I really like how broad your models are, from young girl to grown man (with beard). And that you are getting into doing interesting angles. Much improvement on the nose shading for the girl, its softness really shapes her face. I also like how you have used your shading to define the concave areas of the mans face, giving it a unique personality. All I can say on this is keep practicing. Spend more time with each piece and shade in layers. It might help you to use a softer pencil (like a 6B) to really mark in the darkest dark like the pupil and nostrils. From here you will be able to build your values and get a stronger variation in shades. This is something which comes with practice. You should be really happy with your work :)I like your style where you define the face but leave the hair to the imagination. Where you do define some of the hair make sure that the shading (such as on the man portrait) flows in the direction the hair strands would rather than a straight hatching, this will continue the shaping you have started with the shading of the face and keep the viewer in the 3d mindset.Great job,Keep creating, Cara

Hello Agostino,Nice work on your final portrait. The proportions are excellent. The toning and shade shaping her face chin and cheeks are especially good. I also like the flow of the hair.My recommendation on this one however is to soften the shadows on the bridge of the nose. They should appear more like the shade you used on the apple to the cheeks creating a soft curve rather than a sharp edge, This will also allow the bridge to widen a little and look a little more natural in its shape.Great proportions, well done on this project, I hope to see more of your art.Keep creating, Cara

Hello Agostino,Great job on these exercises, I really like how you took the extra step and attempted variations in lips and noses. Doing this extra practice will really help you understand the lessons and improve your drawing.Your shading has a really good technique to it. My only recommendation is to be a bit bolder, do another layer of work and add in darker values to heighten the contrast in your sketches.Good use of the ten face exercise creating some unique personalities with your proportion play. Your face map and measurements were also spot on, I can see you have an eye for detail.I look forward to seeing a full face illustration by you, great work.Keep Creating, Cara

Hello Cara,
Thank you very much. :)
Cheers
Agostino

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