10 common blunders.

Original: We asked people to draw ketchup; they drew Heinz.
Revised: You used to smash tomatoes for that fresh taste. Today, you just open Heinz.
Original blunders:
1-Navel gazing.
2-no call to action.

Original: We asked people to draw ketchup; they drew Heinz.
Revised: You used to smash tomatoes for that fresh taste. Today, you just open Heinz.
Original blunders:
1-Navel gazing.
2-no call to action.