Bernie Raffe AMPA

Verbessere deine Fotografie Teil I: Tipps und Tricks, um fantastische Fotos mit jeder Kamera aufzunehmen

Hi Kyoko,Thanks for sharing your photos, here's some of my thoughts.1. Great composition in the first shot, perfectly positioned between the two buildings, creating diagonal lines. Possibly a little too much space above your ahead, and the pose is a little too static (maybe fold your arms to go with the cross expression)2. Great background and lighting, but you're too central, too much space above your ahead, and the fence goes through your head. Here's how I would have framed it:- <a href="http://www.becomeabetterphotographer.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2020/01/Kyoko1.jpg" rel="nofollow noreferrer noopener" target="_blank">www.becomeabetterphotographer.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2020/01/Kyoko1.jpg</a>3. The landscape composition is ok with the horizon on a third, and the sky looks good but there are no details in the shadow aread and no focal point for the eye to go to.4. Frame within a frame is a neat, good background, I would lose the areas on the side, like this:-  (I also straightened it up)<a href="http://www.becomeabetterphotographer.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2020/01/Kyoko.jpg" rel="nofollow noreferrer noopener" target="_blank">www.becomeabetterphotographer.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2020/01/Kyoko.jpg</a>5. The repeating lines look good, would have looked better I think if you took had taken it from the road, but then you may have been killed by oncoming traffic!!Cheers, Bernie

Thanks, Bernie! My model actually said the same thing about too much space over the head. I'll remember that and the thirds. I'm watching your videos on landscapes next so I'm sure those will be useful.

2. A portrait in a background you normally wouldn't consider
<img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/ca8bb1380870007aeba7213231d088b2/26b5920e 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/ca8bb1380870007aeba7213231d088b2/26b5920e 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/ca8bb1380870007aeba7213231d088b2/26b5920e" loading="lazy" alt="1. A portrait in natural light - image 1 - student project">
 
3. A landscape photograph
<img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/ca8bb1380870007aeba7213231d088b2/5de558c1 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/ca8bb1380870007aeba7213231d088b2/5de558c1 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/ca8bb1380870007aeba7213231d088b2/5de558c1" loading="lazy" alt="1. A portrait in natural light - image 2 - student project">
 
4. Frame within a Frame
<img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/ca8bb1380870007aeba7213231d088b2/48bc07b2 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/ca8bb1380870007aeba7213231d088b2/48bc07b2 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/ca8bb1380870007aeba7213231d088b2/48bc07b2" loading="lazy" alt="1. A portrait in natural light - image 3 - student project">
5. An image with repeating lines 
<img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/ca8bb1380870007aeba7213231d088b2/b303942f 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/ca8bb1380870007aeba7213231d088b2/b303942f 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/ca8bb1380870007aeba7213231d088b2/b303942f" loading="lazy" alt="1. A portrait in natural light - image 4 - student project">

1. A portrait in natural light

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