I know I didn't put in much effort in beak or feet. I would love any kind of constructive criticism. I have my university drawing test in a month and I'm counting on Mr. Brent. Plus I made the shape of the body with a tilted egg rather than a oval. For me it was easier that way.
Also this isn't my first attempt so if your first attempt didn't go well then treat yourself with patience and keep trying. Just as Mr.Brent said. I'm willing to take all 7 courses.