Emma McIntosh

Fun with Fungi: Texture, Composition, and Color

<p>Hi Gia, thanks for posting your work! Great choices of colour, the firey reds and muted grey greens really make this piece pop. I like they way you're using very fine lines against a softer shape in the centre, however as you move to some of the other mushrooms they start to lose some definition and could benefit from some sharper edges or some darker values. Composition wise, the mushroom arrangement is cleverly weighted bottom right with spindly tall mushrooms top left, however the stump you've anchored them on has a kind of empty, blank space top left... I think if you were to alter the shape of the stump up there, and kind of cut into that top left bit, it would mimic the shape of your mushroom composition and create a bit more interest there.</p>

Hello. Thank you so much for your advice, I will work on it:)

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