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gazpacho

Hi! I am Elisa and thanks for the great class. This is my story..

Unit 3: Writing your story.

This is an Easy-reader book.

Classic plot Structure.

This is the story about a Kingdom of bugs where the Queen bug is very powerful and everybody else is a slave. (the POV is external).

The slaves do all everything she wants even when it doesn’t make sense. For example she asks for a gazpacho with only green vegetables, as she only likes the color green.

But during the process of making it a clumsy bug with her head on the cloud has collected some tomato for the gazpacho, forgetting about the rules of the kingdom.

She pour it into the pot turning all the other bugs worried and the Queen angry. She doesn’t get everybody’s upset. But isn’t it the way of preparing a good tasty gazpacho? :)

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Gazpacho

BEGINNING

pg.1: bug walking across the page

pg.2-3: In a busy underground Kingdom a Queen bug craves for some gazpacho.

Her trustful slaves work very hard to satisfy every desire she has! The carry each ingredient to the end of the cliff and throw it into the big pot where the tasty gazpacho will be done. “Our Queen wants everything green!”

pg. 4-5: But she likes only green vegetables so they carefully pick only the right ones, if they care about their lives! Celeries, cucumbers… “Our queen wants everything green!”

It’s hard work but they don’t loose will. “Our Queen want everything green!”

MIDDLE

pg. 6-7: Among the green crowd of bugs a different color suddenly is making way towards the end of the cliff. It’s not green, it’s red! 

“Pfiu.. I was almost late!” The laggard red spot bug thinks while quickly approaching the pot. What kind of gazpacho would it be without any tasty tomato?

“Stop! No! Stop! Stop!” “Our Queen wants everything green!” All the bugs shout together, making the warning impossible to grasp.

The red spot bug finally gets to the pot and pour the big jar of tomato all the way down. 

It’s all mixed up!

END

pg. 8: Not so satisfied the Queen bug looks this time isn’t it?

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REVISION N.1

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Gazpacho

BEGINNING

pg.1: bug walking across the page

pg.2-3: In a busy underground Kingdom a Queen bug craves for some gazpacho.

Her trustful slaves work very hard to satisfy every desire she has! The carry each ingredient to the end of the cliff and throw it into the big pot where the tasty gazpacho will be done. “Our Queen wants everything green!”

pg. 4-5: But she likes only green vegetables so they carefully pick only the right ones, if they care about their lives! Celeries, cucumbers… “Our queen wants everything green!”

It’s hard work but they don’t loose will. “Our Queen want everything green!”

MIDDLE

pg. 6-7: Among the green crowd of bugs a different color suddenly is making way towards the end of the cliff. It’s not green, it’s red! 

“Pfiu.. I was almost late!” The laggard red spot bug thinks while quickly approaching the pot. What kind of gazpacho would it be without any tasty tomato?

“Stop! No! Stop! Stop!” “Our Queen wants everything green!” All the bugs shout together, making the warning impossible to grasp.

The red spot bug finally gets to the pot and pour the big jar of tomato all the way down. 

It’s all mixed up!

pg. 8-9: Not so satisfied the Queen bug looks this time isn’t it? “Whose fault is this?!?!”

Dead silence among the crowd, despite their glorious devotion to the Queen, they also have a heart after all. 

pg. 10-11: “I will get my revenge on all of you!You’ll regret your mischievous behaviour!” The betrayed Queen ran away to hide her sorrow.

END

pg. 12-13: And even just for once peacefulness prevailed in the bug’s kingdom. (everybody is sharing gazpacho).

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