i find myself always connecting with songs, thus, i'm using song lyrics. 

i also always find myself drawing the same "style" of letter forms. sadly, this was no different. 

a few things i noticed after uploading:

-"please" is slanted. oops.

- the thicks & thins should be more defined

- my cursive "n" needs some work. 

i'm a hard time find any sort of grid that i can really work with. i ended up using dot paper, but i'm not sure if it really works for my taste. any thoughts on that? 

feedback is appreciated!