beauty - student project

below is my first sketch... anyone have constructive critiques? I plan on centering the word create in between the "B" and "t" in beauty and using the cursive lowercase script for the words "your own" - image 1 - student projectI've always told my husband that there is beauty in everything, and asymmetry is beautiful... With all the destruction I see around me everyday (and the cold winter greys lol), i'd like to letter something to represent the beautiful things I see!